A motel called home
Dreams can deliver or bury us19 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
You know Sergeant Floyd, I'm not exactly sure what to make of this one. I know when I read it I know what the words mean but to me personally, I'm not sure how to apply them to my brain. When I read it somehow I feel the power and strength of the write but, not sure how it applies to my life but, somehow I feel like it does. Know this isn't much of a review but, for this one it's all I have to offer. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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You know Sergeant Floyd, I'm not exactly sure what to make of this one. I know when I read it I know what the words mean but to me personally, I'm not sure how to apply them to my brain. When I read it somehow I feel the power and strength of the write but, not sure how it applies to my life but, somehow I feel like it does. Know this isn't much of a review but, for this one it's all I have to offer. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Some people can ill afford the price they set themselves on dreaming. Higher angels are more disgraced in a fall. Thank you for your review.
Comment from royowen
I like your fabulously written, I'm not actually sure what it's about, but like an abstract painting, it's not always about the under sting, but the cleverness and deftness of language, and you certain have that! Plus a brilliant piece of artwork, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I like your fabulously written, I'm not actually sure what it's about, but like an abstract painting, it's not always about the under sting, but the cleverness and deftness of language, and you certain have that! Plus a brilliant piece of artwork, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Its a tune too frequently hummed strolling "the boulevard of broken dreams". Thank you very much for your review.
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Well done
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces the awful throw ups of destiny and how humanity remains at a loss over an explanation concerning the enigma around their occurrence.
The work highlights one of such occurrences( the death of a cab driver) and whether it could be attributed to his stellar disposition or a break in his alignment with the rosary.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphor, oxymorons, alliteration and irony.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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The work reminisces the awful throw ups of destiny and how humanity remains at a loss over an explanation concerning the enigma around their occurrence.
The work highlights one of such occurrences( the death of a cab driver) and whether it could be attributed to his stellar disposition or a break in his alignment with the rosary.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphor, oxymorons, alliteration and irony.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I love your catchy phrase "awful throw ups of destiny". I just hope it isn't catching. Thank you. I really enjoyed your review.
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from tfawcus
A poem that rewards a second reading. Some complex interweaving of ideas here. It can be harrowing to watch a youngster self-destruct. People tend to think themselves more or less immortal when they are young.
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A poem that rewards a second reading. Some complex interweaving of ideas here. It can be harrowing to watch a youngster self-destruct. People tend to think themselves more or less immortal when they are young.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Sometimes we dream about things that are not good for us and we cannot understand why it is withheld from us until something happens that shows us the truth.
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A very well-written poem. Sometimes we dream about things that are not good for us and we cannot understand why it is withheld from us until something happens that shows us the truth.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I really enjoyed it. I like the imagery and the interesting themes you chose. Thanks for sharing this great little piece and have yourself a really great day
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Nice poem, I really enjoyed it. I like the imagery and the interesting themes you chose. Thanks for sharing this great little piece and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
Comment from schatzling
Simply wonderful.
The words truly make me stop and think. makes me see things I was unaware about before.
Well done. I am also honored you selected one of my photos to accompany this piece of fantastic writing. I cannot thank you enough.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Simply wonderful.
The words truly make me stop and think. makes me see things I was unaware about before.
Well done. I am also honored you selected one of my photos to accompany this piece of fantastic writing. I cannot thank you enough.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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The honor was all mine . Thank you very much .
Comment from donette1914
High rent castles in the clouds, very well written and so cleaver on your poem and i love the artwork and outstanding!!! it was a pleasure to read
comment on march 16th by donette1914
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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High rent castles in the clouds, very well written and so cleaver on your poem and i love the artwork and outstanding!!! it was a pleasure to read
comment on march 16th by donette1914
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Your pleasure has brought me great joy. Thanks for reading and replying.
Comment from Wabigoon
Dergeant Floyd--
A good poem. Do you mean one of the Little Rascals? It think capitalizing that would help us to know.
And here:
a (bawdry) neon sign? I know of a "bawdy" sign, but not a bawdry.
I like this poem but it is hard to go with it unless I know what you mean.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Dergeant Floyd--
A good poem. Do you mean one of the Little Rascals? It think capitalizing that would help us to know.
And here:
a (bawdry) neon sign? I know of a "bawdy" sign, but not a bawdry.
I like this poem but it is hard to go with it unless I know what you mean.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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T.hank you. I think I will capitalize.
Comment from cailinraine8
Unique and much said in this poetry... lamenting a young life over way too soon, and the unfairness of the levels of class... everyone could try just as hard as the next person, but we would never attain equality ... a sadness in the heart of society for those who care. I enjoyed reading this, good work!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Unique and much said in this poetry... lamenting a young life over way too soon, and the unfairness of the levels of class... everyone could try just as hard as the next person, but we would never attain equality ... a sadness in the heart of society for those who care. I enjoyed reading this, good work!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thank you for being one who cares.I am so happy you found enjoyment
