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Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Strong Women"Eclectic style
8 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Great thoughts expressed here in a wonderful form. Excellent presentation. Hopefully a lesson to be learned for many. Very current and strong.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
Great thoughts expressed here in a wonderful form. Excellent presentation. Hopefully a lesson to be learned for many. Very current and strong.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Hi JoAnn, thank you very much for your supportive review, much appreciated
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha;
I like how you used two nonets to contrast strong women to the weak. It is so sad when women tear each other down. It seems like they do not understand they are being their own worst enemies.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
Hi, Trisha;
I like how you used two nonets to contrast strong women to the weak. It is so sad when women tear each other down. It seems like they do not understand they are being their own worst enemies.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style and subject.
Thanks, hugs, Trisha
Comment from Marge Setzer
WOW! And yes...women are not born that way. I read a book by Susan Jeffers called Feel the Fear and Do It Anyway. In it she encourages doing the thing that you fear doing. The fear will be there, but only by taking the first step will you overcome that which is holding you back. You become stronger each time you face the fear and make an attempt to reach a goal. To me, this is a major step in becoming a stronger woman. Rejoicing in the accomplishments of other women is equally as important. Supporting others is supporting ourselves. Thank you for your thoughts on the subject. Marge
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
WOW! And yes...women are not born that way. I read a book by Susan Jeffers called Feel the Fear and Do It Anyway. In it she encourages doing the thing that you fear doing. The fear will be there, but only by taking the first step will you overcome that which is holding you back. You become stronger each time you face the fear and make an attempt to reach a goal. To me, this is a major step in becoming a stronger woman. Rejoicing in the accomplishments of other women is equally as important. Supporting others is supporting ourselves. Thank you for your thoughts on the subject. Marge
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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It?s a shame that it takes so long to become one for some women,. Verbal abuse teaches a lot of things, and finally strengthens a woman. I really appreciate your review, it is validating.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks they are strong women really who help, care and mend others come up in life; well written, well done; thank you for sharing. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
This speaks they are strong women really who help, care and mend others come up in life; well written, well done; thank you for sharing. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Thanks review is very positive.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Bucketlist. I enjoyed the first part of this more than the second half. I don't believe in anything negative concerning women or men. We are not put on this planet to judge intentions and for me that's what the second half felt like. good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
Hi Bucketlist. I enjoyed the first part of this more than the second half. I don't believe in anything negative concerning women or men. We are not put on this planet to judge intentions and for me that's what the second half felt like. good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Your opinion is noted. My friend wanted it this way for her presentation. Your review is appreciated
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very interesting poem you have penned for a friend. You used great descriptive words and great imagery. Please check this out:
To enable us to become pioneers in every part of lif
To enable us to become pioneers in every part of (life).
Great job! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
This is a very well written and very interesting poem you have penned for a friend. You used great descriptive words and great imagery. Please check this out:
To enable us to become pioneers in every part of lif
To enable us to become pioneers in every part of (life).
Great job! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Teri. She said her audience liked it, so I?m happy! Your eagle eyed proofreading is very much appreciated. I?m glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your super review, hugs, Trisha
Blessings to you as well
Comment from Sherman541
This is a fantastic poem of support! I love the way you started with Strong and ended with Strength. The diamond shape was a Perfect Idea. Starting with the supporters on top and non-supporters on the bottom. Your friend is a very lucky person to have such a friend as you, to write such a beautiful tribute. Sherman541
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
This is a fantastic poem of support! I love the way you started with Strong and ended with Strength. The diamond shape was a Perfect Idea. Starting with the supporters on top and non-supporters on the bottom. Your friend is a very lucky person to have such a friend as you, to write such a beautiful tribute. Sherman541
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Wow, ?you blew my socks off? with this review! I am honored, and glad you enjoyed reading it
Hugs, Trisha
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You are very welcome and you blew my sock off with this poem it was fantastic ;)
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Thanks again for the honor
Comment from Gloria ....
A wonderful diamond shape, BL and filled with excellent social commentary and insight. So true, that strong women build each other up instead of tearing each other down.
Sabotage, cliques, gossiping are all the domain of the envious and women are no less susceptible than anyone.
A nice gift to your friend and I'm confident she will love it!
Great job you.
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
A wonderful diamond shape, BL and filled with excellent social commentary and insight. So true, that strong women build each other up instead of tearing each other down.
Sabotage, cliques, gossiping are all the domain of the envious and women are no less susceptible than anyone.
A nice gift to your friend and I'm confident she will love it!
Great job you.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you Gloria forbyiudr supportived