Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5 love poem, Oh For Laryngitis, is formatted correctly and seems to be suggesting that you wish your loved one would "Shut up!"

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks love is conditional; his love is boundless to her but he could love her more if she were soundless; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Funny, funny, funny! I love the picture and the words compliment it. I don't know where you get that drawing from but it is so unique and it goes so well with what you're saying so keep up the good work of giving someone a laugh for the day it is so uniquely done thank you again

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This made me smile! Sometimes we have too much to say and it's funny but when you live alone and have no one to take to, you become much more silent! I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Very humorous. Kind of mean actually. But, humorous. A good entry for the contest. She will say "I Do" only in her mind and leave you at the altar. Nice touch with that last line. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018