Comment from Tootie

Exceptional

Congratulations on your 3rd place win with this one. It is fantastic. It makes me smile. I love the artwork that goes with it, too. Perfect. I'm a novice cartoonist so it caught my eye. If I hadn't been in the contest as well, I would've voted for it. Well done!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Hahahaha...I'll bet a lot of men feel that way about their wives/ girlfriends. I love this and I'm a woman, but this is funny. I have read a lot of your work and you seem to have a natural affinity for humorous verse. Love the picture as well, thanks so much for the smile :)

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 love poem. A lover wishes his partner not to talk too much. He will even love her more. Some men can also be blabber mouths and never stop.moaning about everything. Lol.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Ha ha ha - clever rhyme. Good satire. Good form, flow and presentation. Got a smile...a chuckle even! This has a bouncy beat - not easy to achieve in a three liner. Bravo

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem. I enjoyed it as it made me smile. I really liked your rhyme.
I wish you good luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Why do some people go on and on? I don't get it, but I keep my distance from such folks. Your poem is humorous, but I see the talking as a serious problem. So your poem is doubly good for me.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Hello again, after a long absence. I hope you have been well, Debbie.
I apologize for my negligence for more than a week, and for replying only now to your insightful comments.
I have no valid excuse.
I'm glad to hear you're still liking my work.
Don

reply by Debbie Pope on 19-Mar-2018

Good to hear from you, Don. My computer crashed. I am behind as well.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

You are a funny man. I can see why you and Barb got along so well:)

This is hilarious (and love can be).

Good luck in the contest.

teresa

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork.
-Syllable count is good.
-The rhyme is effective and
adds to the humor in the poem.
-A clever approach to a love poem, Don.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very cute wording and very cute imagery. I am sure my husband thinks that at times too! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse of love has a satire note.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018