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Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Trisha;
My prayers are with you and your friend. It is a tough time for both of you and your families. Hang tough and know the Lord is with you, and just feel hugs coming your way,

~patty~

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much patti, I?m praying for your friend.
Comment from Henry King
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This is a very descriptive prose verse. The poet elicited thought and emotion from this reader which resonated through his mind like a melody. The rhythm flowed smoothly when the words were voiced.

Does that love have to be platonic? Why not just love? The poet is describing the subject as satisfying a vital human social need, the need of and for companionship. Never define love so narrowly that it is only used when talking of sexuality.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
    I wanted to reassure his wife that it is platonic. I feel deeply for him. I appreciate the thought Henry, but I felt compelled to do it that way. Thanks for reviewing so kindly.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. You must care very much for one another. I hope all turns out well for him or her. I like the message before the poem, it is lovely and inspiring.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    Thanks, te
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    He has empowered me emotionally so much., and brought me through 4 years of rough times. Than you very much for your review.
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A beautiful tribute for your good friend with sincere wishes and echoes of your mutual friendships and love. I wish your friend well, your write is emotional and compassionate. Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
    Unfortunately he has stage four ca,,, He has cared about me for a long time. Thanks for your wishes, I wanted to tell him while we both have time,, We are both facing big health challenges
    Hugs,
    Trisha
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 05-Mar-2018
    I wish you luck and it?s good to have a friend when you are both in need, love Dolly x