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The Life of Mrs. Armstrong

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Out of retirement..

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Comment from lyenochka
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You really adopted all your students!! This one really tugged at your heart, I can tell. I am curious as to what you said to his doctors. I don't know the time period but I know some new meds are helping AIDS patients now.

Previously you didn't have the 's' after Barre. I saw it written with and without the hyphen.
"Guillain Barres is not only an (Guillain-Barre)

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
    Thank you so much Helene, wow it sounds like you were definitely busy. Ahaaa, it is my secret! Definitely new drugs and new hope. I will fix that in a moment. Merry Christmas, Happy New Years, Season Greetings! Hugs n smiles.
Comment from MelB
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I've known several people who have MS and diabetes. Not pretty at all. I bet the cue cards were a real help to them all. I'm curious if you have a treatment protocol to discuss or something else.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
    Thank you for reviewing Mel, I certainly appreciate you kind comments. Hey that is a good suggestion, I will have to see what I can do. Again thanks.
reply by MelB on 04-Mar-2018
    My pleasure:)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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I wonder why you wanted to talk to his doctors. Could the lab tests have been wrong?

I have, or have had, many autoimmune diseases: rheumatoid arthritis, psoriasis, diabetes, ulcerative colitis, and the worst one of all, ankylosing spondylitis. The last is the one affecting my lungs as it progresses. It first fused my spine into a crooked position (I do have a few joints that work), and then attacked my lungs with what consists of slow-moving fibrosis and COPD, but at least it is not as fast at killing as the idiopathic kind.

No one in my family has had autoimmune diseases, except that my dad got diabetes as he aged, but that's a common one.

I wonder why they can't find a cure for a confused immune system. Do you know?

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
    Wow, that is a lot for one person to bear. You are one brave woman. Unfortunately I have no clue regarding a confused immune system. I am guessing that one day but not in my time nor yours they will make a discovery. In answer to your first question, I guess you will have to wait and see lol, sorry but I couldn't resist. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from Pantygynt
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Another great episode in the story. One or two things need polishing here. Take a second look at these. Mrs Armstrong would tell you always to read your work through when you have finished or think you have finished. Lol.

Typo here: " diabetes mellitus in but one." 'is' not 'in'.

Number agreement needed here " infectionary processes that affect the skin and produce(s) lesions." Plural subnect needs plural form of verb.

"... that because no two countries, in fact not two counties use the same abbreviations..." I am not quite sure wahat has happened here but I think there is an element of unecessary repetition.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
    Thank you once again for reviewing, I always value your comments, the first two I will correct shortly, the third was to stress that between counties and countries the use of abbreviations were varied.