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Comment from Susanjohn
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What an awesome limerick!! But oh no H.E. double hockey sticks am I eating any puffer fish fugu! This made me smile..well done, I enjoyed reading. :-)

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
    Thanks very much for the unexpected, and most welcome review of this bit of silliness. I'm glad it made you smile :) Craig
reply by Susanjohn on 22-Apr-2018
    It did! see :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Comment from frogbook
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Well that was an original idea and evoked a bit of scare there too. These are scary little guys. Best of luck in the voting booth.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    Thanks very much for the kind comments and good wishes :)
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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This is sheer brilliance. I loved the mi of humour and horror. A fantastic entry very well done and kindest regards good luck in the competition with this intelligent write, Meia xx

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    Thanks very much for the lovely,kind words, Meia - and thanks for creating a fun contest :)
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

You did a good job with this one. Limerick's aren't as easy as people think they are.

I appreciate the cleverness of this one, the play on the deadly aspect of the fare.

nice job
GMG

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
    Thanks so much for the kind words, GMG. I totally agree. Not in regard to this contest, but just in general, I see a lot of posts that indicate people don't really "get" the rhyming pattern of a limerick. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a good entry for the Lymerick With A Twist writing contest.
Your verse has a clear story with just the right amount of horror.
Well done, and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the kind comments and good wishes, Sharon.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks what makes the young Phil to ask about Fugu dish that had a killing taste so Phil was to swill; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
    Thank very much for reviewing.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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These limericks are so much fun. Yours is particularly clever. It has a twist. And it has a silly rhyme, which adds to the fun of it all. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
    Thanks very much for the kind wishes and the lovely comments.
Comment from Katie Solis
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Like you said, it pays to be nice. Great limerick, I like the twist, that only after he eats his meal he asks what he was, and the answer is him being told of his death sentence. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
    Sometimes it pays to avoid the "special of the day" ;-) Many thanks for the kind words and good wishes.