The Book of Fine Poetry
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Comment from Henry King
Very understandable verse. Rhyme and rhythm are there. A father's anguish is evident by the verdant word painting which is presented. A bitter response to his heartfelt plea.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Very understandable verse. Rhyme and rhythm are there. A father's anguish is evident by the verdant word painting which is presented. A bitter response to his heartfelt plea.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the review and time Henry.
Dr Ricky 1024.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Ricky1024
I read your poem of when your were looking for your son deceased the reaper with his
Evil Santa of Clause! would say
Come now with me Meer and Meek Mortal!"
"Here, take My Boney White and Ebony Hand!"
then how in your closing of how when God speaks up to say-
"I HAVE YOUR ONLY SON JASON NOW, AND HE IS HERE WITH ME...
"AND, ONE, FINE, OF DAY...
"WHEN YOUR TIME HAS COME HERE TO STAY..
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Hello Ricky1024
I read your poem of when your were looking for your son deceased the reaper with his
Evil Santa of Clause! would say
Come now with me Meer and Meek Mortal!"
"Here, take My Boney White and Ebony Hand!"
then how in your closing of how when God speaks up to say-
"I HAVE YOUR ONLY SON JASON NOW, AND HE IS HERE WITH ME...
"AND, ONE, FINE, OF DAY...
"WHEN YOUR TIME HAS COME HERE TO STAY..
Gert
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thanks Gert.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from dmt1967
This poem was very sad and believable. I hope it is poetic liberty and not real life. If it is reality, I am very sorry for your loss. I felt every word of this poem and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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This poem was very sad and believable. I hope it is poetic liberty and not real life. If it is reality, I am very sorry for your loss. I felt every word of this poem and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Unfortunately extremely true.
And thanks.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your sad words are all consuming Ricky and grief grips us and holds us down with its strong thoughts, I hope that you find some peace in your life, very sad words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Your sad words are all consuming Ricky and grief grips us and holds us down with its strong thoughts, I hope that you find some peace in your life, very sad words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Why, thanks ever so much Miss Dolly.
Ricky....
Comment from Trudi Perkins
This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. I really enjoyed this and I like you think writing is therapeutic and good fir the soul.Thanks again.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. I really enjoyed this and I like you think writing is therapeutic and good fir the soul.Thanks again.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Why, thanks again Miss Trudy!
Ricky...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the death of son, feeling of as cold as ice, and walking to meet and traced him in heaven; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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This speaks about the death of son, feeling of as cold as ice, and walking to meet and traced him in heaven; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from joycetreasures
What a sad a story? Your title, "As Cold As Ice" fitted your writing so well. I'm not sure it this is a real story. What I do know, like you said, "God is always there for those who love Him". Satan is evil. He cares for only those who will turn their back on Christ. Of course, death leaves anyone cold and feelings are numb. Taking a son or daughter is hard, but harder when the devil is telling you, he's waiting for you. He's laughing at you, is painful! This is a powerful story of angry and helplessness. Yes, we are mortals, as stated in this story. Your words are touching with so much energy and no empathy from Satan. You did a good job and sharing how difficult it is to lose your only son. Our God lost His only son also.
Your story shares a father defenselessness and powerless hope in the loss of his only son. Also, the photo was is a good choice! A very touching story. Good luck.
Thanks
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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What a sad a story? Your title, "As Cold As Ice" fitted your writing so well. I'm not sure it this is a real story. What I do know, like you said, "God is always there for those who love Him". Satan is evil. He cares for only those who will turn their back on Christ. Of course, death leaves anyone cold and feelings are numb. Taking a son or daughter is hard, but harder when the devil is telling you, he's waiting for you. He's laughing at you, is painful! This is a powerful story of angry and helplessness. Yes, we are mortals, as stated in this story. Your words are touching with so much energy and no empathy from Satan. You did a good job and sharing how difficult it is to lose your only son. Our God lost His only son also.
Your story shares a father defenselessness and powerless hope in the loss of his only son. Also, the photo was is a good choice! A very touching story. Good luck.
Thanks
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Thanks for your kind words!and review, Joyce.
And welcome to...
"The House of Suffering.
Ricky......
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You are welcome. Happy writing!!!
