The Book of Fine Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Just a Breath Away? (A)"A Collection of My best works.
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Comment from nartoonla
HI, I graps not in full if this is fiction or not. If fiction wow, the emotions are strong and well done. If non-fiction ditto with a bear hug! The pain one carries within never goes away it only softens. God bless la
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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HI, I graps not in full if this is fiction or not. If fiction wow, the emotions are strong and well done. If non-fiction ditto with a bear hug! The pain one carries within never goes away it only softens. God bless la
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Unfortunately extremely true...
Thanks my Dear.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from RGstar
So strong a write, and so much emotion and pain, which is a natural trait in your writing. I feel for your pain, for I know it is sincere, and one cannot help feeling, reading what you have to offer.
Keep strong.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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So strong a write, and so much emotion and pain, which is a natural trait in your writing. I feel for your pain, for I know it is sincere, and one cannot help feeling, reading what you have to offer.
Keep strong.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Thanks an honour, I'm sure.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Sherman541
You always write such heartfelt things about your son. I truly believe that from time to time those that have passed and moved on to Heaven, stop by to see us. Check on us and let us know they did not go far. I don't want to sound like a broken record.
However, I am so sorry to know and hear of your great loss. That is a pain that never goes away, a small piece of our hearts get torn away, we can never replace that, but over time it does get better. Never smaller, never less pain, but we just learn how to live with that loss. God Bless Sherman541
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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You always write such heartfelt things about your son. I truly believe that from time to time those that have passed and moved on to Heaven, stop by to see us. Check on us and let us know they did not go far. I don't want to sound like a broken record.
However, I am so sorry to know and hear of your great loss. That is a pain that never goes away, a small piece of our hearts get torn away, we can never replace that, but over time it does get better. Never smaller, never less pain, but we just learn how to live with that loss. God Bless Sherman541
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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thanks my dear and so true.
Dr Ricky 1024.
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You are most welcome, my friend :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
Very good job with this poignant poem. I too long for the day when I can be reunited with those that I have loved and lost. Losing is the hardest thing about live. Memories keep me going as well. Beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Very good job with this poignant poem. I too long for the day when I can be reunited with those that I have loved and lost. Losing is the hardest thing about live. Memories keep me going as well. Beautiful poem.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Thanks Debbie for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks bereaved father still finds his son is just a breath away in heaven; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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This speaks bereaved father still finds his son is just a breath away in heaven; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Harry Smith
This is a very heartfelt poem with lots of imagery. It was sad but it was so beautifully written the reader could feel the emotions of each and every word. The poem was a little sad but also joyous in it's own way. The reader believes the writer feel relief whenever they write about their love and time spent with their son.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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This is a very heartfelt poem with lots of imagery. It was sad but it was so beautifully written the reader could feel the emotions of each and every word. The poem was a little sad but also joyous in it's own way. The reader believes the writer feel relief whenever they write about their love and time spent with their son.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Glad you enjoyed this Harry.
Dr Ricky 1024.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Rebecca Runions
I'm so sorry for your loss. This is obviously a heartfelt poem and vividly expresses your grief and love for your son. The memories you describe are truly touching. However, the rhyming scheme and structure of the poem are slightly difficult to follow.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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I'm so sorry for your loss. This is obviously a heartfelt poem and vividly expresses your grief and love for your son. The memories you describe are truly touching. However, the rhyming scheme and structure of the poem are slightly difficult to follow.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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roiling review diss after you and Steve had great rhyme and gave it a 5-star review so I'm going to have to go with his thoughts and not you're sorry dr. Ricci 1024
Comment from royowen
My children are grown now, with families, but the memories of them growing up are very much still with me, and believe it or not, I miss those days. However yours are much worse, and your memories are confed to a time-frame. Well done, Rocky, beautifully written, with great rhyme to mark it. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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My children are grown now, with families, but the memories of them growing up are very much still with me, and believe it or not, I miss those days. However yours are much worse, and your memories are confed to a time-frame. Well done, Rocky, beautifully written, with great rhyme to mark it. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thanks Roy for your wonderful thoughts and great review dr. Ricky 1024
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Welcome Rivky
Comment from Gloria ....
Nice poem as a tribute to your son, Ricky. I still have a little trouble with the quotation marks, but it's getting easier to overlook them.
Nice work and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Nice poem as a tribute to your son, Ricky. I still have a little trouble with the quotation marks, but it's getting easier to overlook them.
Nice work and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thanks Gloria for your suggestion and great review I'll write some with less quotation marks and see if it gets better reviews Royal and like to gave it 5 * steady set of great rhyming ability but another woman who's never reviewed any when I work 8 4 star stating that didn't so everybody has their own preferences I guess have a blessed day
