FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "A Big Hug For Sparkle.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from cailinraine8
Very cute story.! I can see this in a picture book with many pictures. Children would love it. I hope that you are publishing or thinking of it.! Nicely written.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Very cute story.! I can see this in a picture book with many pictures. Children would love it. I hope that you are publishing or thinking of it.! Nicely written.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Hello cailinraine: Thank you for using your time to review my children's story. Thank you for the five stars. You are a very encouraging helper. Thank you. I'm currently working on a children's picture book. In the mean time I've already published a poem anthology for our youth. For more information, please just check out my poem anthology. You'll find my book at the bottom of my profile page. If you find time, please have a look at it. Tell me what you think of it. I hope you'll like it. Sincerely: rhonnie69.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
What a sweet story! Never underestimate the imagination of a child! My own son had an imaginary friend when he was just a little boy. Tad bit scary, but CHOCHEE visited our home for at least a year!
Two nits: faun = fawn...
And every time a speaker speaks, begin a new line.
Best Wishes
diane
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Hello!
What a sweet story! Never underestimate the imagination of a child! My own son had an imaginary friend when he was just a little boy. Tad bit scary, but CHOCHEE visited our home for at least a year!
Two nits: faun = fawn...
And every time a speaker speaks, begin a new line.
Best Wishes
diane
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Hello Mrs.KT: Thank you for your helpful review. Thank you for the five stars. Just to let you know, a faun is a mythical rural deity having a human shape with the ears, horns, tail, and the hind legs of a goat. I'll edit my speaker's beginning lines. Thank you for your suggestion. Thank you my dear helper. sincerely: rhonnie69.
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Oh good lord!
My sincerest apologies! That is a triple nit for me!!!! Of course a faun is a mythical creature...writes the individual who taught mythology for years! GAH!!!!! It's been already a long day!
My apologies!
diane
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My dear friend, Diane. I'm not mad at you.(SMILE) Have you ever wondered why pencils are made with erasers? In my case, I'm glad about that. What would I do without erasers? I've worn my share of them, "OUT." (SMILE) again.
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Well, you are much too kind! Truly that was stupidity on my part!
Goodness!
Diane