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Comment from nartoonla
Hello Ricky, That was beautiful and much as I believe still have doubts but a three-year-old child mind is pure.
Well described as it encouraged a lot of people including me. And so for that good feeling, you give us alland reinforcing one fate... I will give you six stars. God bless and thank you!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Hello Ricky, That was beautiful and much as I believe still have doubts but a three-year-old child mind is pure.
Well described as it encouraged a lot of people including me. And so for that good feeling, you give us alland reinforcing one fate... I will give you six stars. God bless and thank you!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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what amazes me about this was a gift from one child to another my nine-year-old grandson Alex heard about it and he went and Googled little boy who sees heaven and then the story came up on Facebook most of what I said was real I change the name in the hospital and then affect a little kid had a heart attack to go to heaven those things I added for effect but mostly everything else from the markings of Christ Angels carrying him seeing his grandfather and his sister Cassie if it passed away before him they were all true It gives us more of a deeper sense of the afterlife thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Zue65
I have watched too the YouTube video of Colton. I was blessed and inspired by the revelations of Colton about his meeting with Jesus, his grandpa and little sister. You have perfectly infused the story in your poem. God bless.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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I have watched too the YouTube video of Colton. I was blessed and inspired by the revelations of Colton about his meeting with Jesus, his grandpa and little sister. You have perfectly infused the story in your poem. God bless.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank nassus for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from sunao
Oh, I know that story!! Colton Burpo!!! Thank you so much for sharing his story in vivid detail. Heaven truly exists!! I believe that!! Please keep up the great work and have a fabulous day!!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Oh, I know that story!! Colton Burpo!!! Thank you so much for sharing his story in vivid detail. Heaven truly exists!! I believe that!! Please keep up the great work and have a fabulous day!!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Yes and thanks for the beautiful review and encouragement.
Dr.Ricky 1024
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Your welcome!!
Comment from Sugarray77
I loved the book "Heaven is for Real". So many encouraging phrases in your poem that inspire us and help us to grow in faith. Thank you for sharing this with us. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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I loved the book "Heaven is for Real". So many encouraging phrases in your poem that inspire us and help us to grow in faith. Thank you for sharing this with us. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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My Pleasure I'm sure.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from lyenochka
Such a sad story! May the Lord comfort the Colton's parents. I was hoping it would be a story where little Colton saw Heaven but got to come back to earth to grow into old age. At these times, we ask the Lord, Why? Perhaps in Heaven, it will all be clear.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Such a sad story! May the Lord comfort the Colton's parents. I was hoping it would be a story where little Colton saw Heaven but got to come back to earth to grow into old age. At these times, we ask the Lord, Why? Perhaps in Heaven, it will all be clear.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Now come on lyenochka, you dont think?
Conclusion Today!
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from mermaids
You tell an amazing story here and the reader feels for the parents of little Colton. Heaven is a special place with many angels and your poetic form captures feelings and emotions.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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You tell an amazing story here and the reader feels for the parents of little Colton. Heaven is a special place with many angels and your poetic form captures feelings and emotions.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Eileen there will be a conclusion to this a little later on today let's all pray for Colton come back home where he belongs?
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Boogienights
Wow that was a lot to take in, it brings up a lot of questions. I'm assuming this is a true story and it's very sad so I'm sorry that this happened. I'm afraid that no one will ever know why certain things happen or why young children are taken from their families, at least not until we die. But at least there is faith to hold on to and if you have it, it can make acceptance easier. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Wow that was a lot to take in, it brings up a lot of questions. I'm assuming this is a true story and it's very sad so I'm sorry that this happened. I'm afraid that no one will ever know why certain things happen or why young children are taken from their families, at least not until we die. But at least there is faith to hold on to and if you have it, it can make acceptance easier. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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thanks for reviewing the first two parts of this amazing and True Story 2 final conclusion will be coming later on this evening dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
It is difficult to tell such a story in a poem without making the reader to shed tears. Dr. Ricky in writing this, rather gave one a tense feeling that keeps one hoping for more. Its a big plus for him in sustaining attention.
Apart from proving to us that heaven is real, the work highlights heaven and its cohorts as callous people who would rather than let Thomas and Sonja enjoy their babies here on earth, choose to harvest them for their own selfish heavenly pleasure.
The work constitutes a significant commentary on the indifference of heavenly hosts on the plight of most medically challenged people on earth.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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It is difficult to tell such a story in a poem without making the reader to shed tears. Dr. Ricky in writing this, rather gave one a tense feeling that keeps one hoping for more. Its a big plus for him in sustaining attention.
Apart from proving to us that heaven is real, the work highlights heaven and its cohorts as callous people who would rather than let Thomas and Sonja enjoy their babies here on earth, choose to harvest them for their own selfish heavenly pleasure.
The work constitutes a significant commentary on the indifference of heavenly hosts on the plight of most medically challenged people on earth.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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thanks Lloyd for your well to find review and I will conclude this later on today talk to Ricky 1024
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Susan Burger
This is an interesting story. I can't wait to read what else Colton saw!
The reason for the rating is I found a few typos. The first is in the paragraph that starts with "The year was 2007" I think you meant "loss", not lost.
Six paragraphs later, the second one I saw (I could be wrong) but I think you meant Presbyterian. At the end of that same paragraph I think you meant Pastor.
Hope this helps! Looking forward to reading more of this book!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is an interesting story. I can't wait to read what else Colton saw!
The reason for the rating is I found a few typos. The first is in the paragraph that starts with "The year was 2007" I think you meant "loss", not lost.
Six paragraphs later, the second one I saw (I could be wrong) but I think you meant Presbyterian. At the end of that same paragraph I think you meant Pastor.
Hope this helps! Looking forward to reading more of this book!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thanks Susan for that purse I don't take away any errors for grammar and of course you didn't comment on the ones when they the little boy speak somebody else come in and gave for stores for that also I never give less than 5 and less two-piece is horribly written and and horribly misspelled otherwise everybody gets five or six from me just a thought have a nice day dr. Ricky 1024 conclusion later today
Comment from Henry King
Review by Henry: This is a special story heartfelt, wrenching and the verbal picture drawn is vivid.
Ricky, it is marred because of misspelled words. It appears no editing was done.
3d verse, 3d line: "lost" should be loss.
9th verse, 3d line: "Prespetarian" should be Presbyterian.
4th line: "Pasture" should be Pastor.
17th verse, 3rd line: "Da otter two too," is the word "otter" supposed to be spelled other?
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Review by Henry: This is a special story heartfelt, wrenching and the verbal picture drawn is vivid.
Ricky, it is marred because of misspelled words. It appears no editing was done.
3d verse, 3d line: "lost" should be loss.
9th verse, 3d line: "Prespetarian" should be Presbyterian.
4th line: "Pasture" should be Pastor.
17th verse, 3rd line: "Da otter two too," is the word "otter" supposed to be spelled other?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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When Colton speaks I purposely misspelled those words for their coming from the three year old thanks for your review doctor Ricky 1024
