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Comment from judiverse
Funny, and presented in precise 5-7-5 syllable count. Great last line with the Moby reference. Poor Ahab was just compelled to do what he did. He had to get Moby Dick. The whale wasn't too fond of Ahab either. Quite a feud going on there. It made a whale of a tale, though. judi
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Funny, and presented in precise 5-7-5 syllable count. Great last line with the Moby reference. Poor Ahab was just compelled to do what he did. He had to get Moby Dick. The whale wasn't too fond of Ahab either. Quite a feud going on there. It made a whale of a tale, though. judi
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thankd, Judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, so now we're into whales. I loved this one. Whales are incredible mammals. I've always been fascinated with them. I enjoyed your fun poem, All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill, so now we're into whales. I loved this one. Whales are incredible mammals. I've always been fascinated with them. I enjoyed your fun poem, All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Ulla.
Comment from frogbook
Ah a new series with a very interesting subject and to start the most famous whale of all time-makes perfect sense. Clever and a corny joke-just the way I like 'em-haha.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Ah a new series with a very interesting subject and to start the most famous whale of all time-makes perfect sense. Clever and a corny joke-just the way I like 'em-haha.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Oh whale.
Comment from nomi338
Wow! This is one whale of a tale. Happy to see that you are up to the task. I am surprised to see that you did not feel dwarfed by the enormous task of writing about such a large subject. LOL.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Wow! This is one whale of a tale. Happy to see that you are up to the task. I am surprised to see that you did not feel dwarfed by the enormous task of writing about such a large subject. LOL.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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It was whale worth it.
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Groan...LOL.
Comment from damommy
I always feel sorry for the whale. He was in his own home, and man came looking for him.
Lovely presentation. A subject I really enjoy. I once adopted a whale, but after a few years, she died.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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I always feel sorry for the whale. He was in his own home, and man came looking for him.
Lovely presentation. A subject I really enjoy. I once adopted a whale, but after a few years, she died.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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I can?t imagine the size of the fish bowl (humor...hope you?re over its passage).
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That's funny. LOL
They sent me maps of where she was and what she was doing. After a while, she disappeared and it's assumed she died. She was already old when I adopted her. If I'd had a big enough bowl, I'd have brought her home. lol
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, great pun, Billy. Moby was wrong, but Ahab beat him, and you got to write a fun poem, and Melville got to write an entire novel.
Great good fun. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Ha, great pun, Billy. Moby was wrong, but Ahab beat him, and you got to write a fun poem, and Melville got to write an entire novel.
Great good fun. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written short poem you have penned . You used very good descriptive words and great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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This is a very well written short poem you have penned . You used very good descriptive words and great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome!