This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Happy Family?"Veronica is sent back again
28 total reviews
Comment from pbomar1115
Veronica does a terrific job juggling two different ways of life. Keeping the relationship in good balance with her husband, for example, requires love and understanding. They are a good match.
Phillip
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Veronica does a terrific job juggling two different ways of life. Keeping the relationship in good balance with her husband, for example, requires love and understanding. They are a good match.
Phillip
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Phillip, for your understanding review. I sometimes wonder what I'd be like if I was Veronica, and it really happened. I think I'd be excited and scared, and knowing me, I'd totally change the future! I'd check the lottery numbers for a start, lol! Thanks again, my friend.
:) Sandra x
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You're welcome, Sandra.
Phillip
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice work, Sandra. I enjoy how you make your characters distinct and give them a life of their own. Good humor as well. Strong cliffhanger at the end. I look forward to more.
It was just after I'd emptied the glasses from my display cabinet so I could give it a good polish, when I received a call from James.--Suggest a comma after cabinet. This separates the non-essential information from the main sentence.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Nice work, Sandra. I enjoy how you make your characters distinct and give them a life of their own. Good humor as well. Strong cliffhanger at the end. I look forward to more.
It was just after I'd emptied the glasses from my display cabinet so I could give it a good polish, when I received a call from James.--Suggest a comma after cabinet. This separates the non-essential information from the main sentence.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, Russell. I've put the missing comma in, thank you for spotting that. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed reading this post , with the happy family of James and Veronica, having their fun time with the kids. I like the way James cared for Veronica and his acceptance of his wife as a time traveler. The story ended with a suspenseful clue as to what is in store for the next post. Very well done.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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I enjoyed reading this post , with the happy family of James and Veronica, having their fun time with the kids. I like the way James cared for Veronica and his acceptance of his wife as a time traveler. The story ended with a suspenseful clue as to what is in store for the next post. Very well done.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, my friend. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading my bit of normality in Veronica's life. We all need it! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from Treischel
It's been a while since I last caught a new chapter in your book. Lots has happened since then, but the story continues very well. you always add such colorful detail the the story seems very real and the actions natural. I am amazed at your ability to create such a complex tail. It is excellent. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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It's been a while since I last caught a new chapter in your book. Lots has happened since then, but the story continues very well. you always add such colorful detail the the story seems very real and the actions natural. I am amazed at your ability to create such a complex tail. It is excellent. Keep it up.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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That is such a lovely review, Tom, thank you so much. It's so nice of you to come and read this part. Thank you!! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Sandra;
Now, I am trying to figure out what James has uncovered now. This story continues to fascinate me. I wish I could write about time travel, but I need to find a unique angle and it feels as if everyone has been written about.
Your story is fresh and exciting. We have an actual plot to the travel and a mystery - unlike some of the other stories about time travel.
Well, in the meantime, I will just have to read yours and let my mind hatch its own plan,
~patty~
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Hi, Sandra;
Now, I am trying to figure out what James has uncovered now. This story continues to fascinate me. I wish I could write about time travel, but I need to find a unique angle and it feels as if everyone has been written about.
Your story is fresh and exciting. We have an actual plot to the travel and a mystery - unlike some of the other stories about time travel.
Well, in the meantime, I will just have to read yours and let my mind hatch its own plan,
~patty~
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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What a lovely thing to say, Patty, thank you so much. I was surprised how many Time Travel books are out there now. It's todays fashion, tomorrow it will be something else. Thanks, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed reading mine. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Sandra, it was nice having a chapter in current life. I enjoyed catching up with everybody.
But I've got to admit, I'm mighty curious about what James found out!
This is a really good addition to the story.
Well done!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Sandra, it was nice having a chapter in current life. I enjoyed catching up with everybody.
But I've got to admit, I'm mighty curious about what James found out!
This is a really good addition to the story.
Well done!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, Sue, for the fabulous review and the lovely stars. We all have those normal days, and Veronica certainly did this time. :) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from estory
Lots of colorful dialogue, full of all kinds of emotional connections, move this story along. the characters are well defined, the relationships intertwined, just like life. There's a lot of summing up and talking things over here, as opposed to all the action in previous installments. but sometimes you have to take stock and find out where you're at and reconnoiter. Overall, this has been an interesting story, with an interesting premise. It really reads like television script writing and I can see myself in this story with all the characters around me and the action swirling around. A little more polish, and who knows where you can go with it. estory
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Lots of colorful dialogue, full of all kinds of emotional connections, move this story along. the characters are well defined, the relationships intertwined, just like life. There's a lot of summing up and talking things over here, as opposed to all the action in previous installments. but sometimes you have to take stock and find out where you're at and reconnoiter. Overall, this has been an interesting story, with an interesting premise. It really reads like television script writing and I can see myself in this story with all the characters around me and the action swirling around. A little more polish, and who knows where you can go with it. estory
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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What a wonderful review, thank you so very much, Estory, I really appreciate what you've written. Thank you!! Big hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from Rasmine
I have to sit and dance while writing this review, Sandra. Okay, it's done. Listen, is that your book that is really published? Awesome!
Okay, on to the next if it's on my message page. :D
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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I have to sit and dance while writing this review, Sandra. Okay, it's done. Listen, is that your book that is really published? Awesome!
Okay, on to the next if it's on my message page. :D
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, Rasmine, for your lovely review. If you mean the book I'm holding on my profile page, YES!!! I am over the moon with it. I have been interviewed by a reporter, it features a whole page in a magazine, and now I've been asked to be interviewed about my book on the radio! I've been floating on air since my book came out. This one is the second in the Trilogy, and then the 3rd on will be started later this year. Thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from mbroyles2
You are doing a wonderful job presenting this second installment.
At first I thought I would like to be like Veronica bouncing back and forth through time, but lately I find myself glad I don't.
She has her hands full balancing the past with th present.
Michael
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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You are doing a wonderful job presenting this second installment.
At first I thought I would like to be like Veronica bouncing back and forth through time, but lately I find myself glad I don't.
She has her hands full balancing the past with th present.
Michael
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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LOL! I'm in a quandary as to whether I'd like to be like Veronica or not. I'll see when I've finished the final book in the trilogy. I have enough of a balancing act making sure she does it right, lol. Thank you so much, Michael, for you lovely review and all those wonderful stars. I do appreciate it coming from one of my favourite novelists on FS and of the authors I follow in book shops! Thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
It was lovely to see some 'normality' in Veronica's hectic life! You paint such a vivid picture in the reader's mind, it's almost as though we're there in the room with the family.
The ending has us waiting to find out where Jacob is while his young son is still at the mercy of Sir John - and it's not sounding like good news. I can't wait to find out!
Hugs from cloudy Glasgow,
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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It was lovely to see some 'normality' in Veronica's hectic life! You paint such a vivid picture in the reader's mind, it's almost as though we're there in the room with the family.
The ending has us waiting to find out where Jacob is while his young son is still at the mercy of Sir John - and it's not sounding like good news. I can't wait to find out!
Hugs from cloudy Glasgow,
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you so very much, my dear Alexix, for another of your wonderful reviews and all those beautiful stars!!! You are so kind. Big hugs, :) Sandra xxxx
