Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
I taught high school English classes for most of my 38 years of teaching, and your poetic offering would be such a wonderful tool to use in an anti-drug class/session/assembly. Wise words told in modern language. Well-crafted.
Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018

Hello Mrs. KT: My beloved school teacher. Thank you for using your time viewing my work, and your encouraging review.
Over the twelve years, that I was in school, I got kind of used to having my work viewed, edited, corrected, and commented on by my teachers. So you are more than welcome, to keep the ball rolling. Thank you, Mrs. KT. What would we do without you school teachers ? Not a heck of a lot. Right? We love every one of you. Thank you, all. Our staff at the, COLORS, work shop, have published a children's book consisting of fifty poems for our children. Please: if you can spare your busy time to do so, check out our poem anthology. Just view our book information at the bottom of our profile page, and tell us, as a school teacher, what you
think of it. We'll never stop needing school teachers' advise. We'll appreciate all the teacher's help, that we can get. Again we thank you, Mrs. KT. sincerely: rhonnie69.

Comment from Susan Burger

Excellent

This is a good entry for the Self Improvement Poetry contest. I liked your rhymes and of course the message is so important and true. The amount of folks addicted to drugs is staggering. Thanks for this positive upbeat approach to this serious subject! Good luck in the competition!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

Comment from George Jr

Excellent

I really liked this poem. Great message and rhyming. I didn't fully understand the last line. I'm sure it as in the way I read it but are you simply stating your upsetting the family when doing drugs or was there more? Anyway, good poem, good message. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018