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Comment from nomi338
Another fine example of what can happen when you are careless with your stinger. Fellows, better be careful where you put your stingers. Wrong hole and bim bam, thank you maam. You are done!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Another fine example of what can happen when you are careless with your stinger. Fellows, better be careful where you put your stingers. Wrong hole and bim bam, thank you maam. You are done!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks, nomi. Good advice.
Comment from judiverse
Who would apologize to a bee? I appreciate the bees for their ability to pollinate and make honey, etc. but they're treacherous little creatures and wouldn't hesitate to sting. They get no sympathy from me. If the bees need a good PR agent, they should definitely see you. Excellent 5-7-5 format. judi
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Who would apologize to a bee? I appreciate the bees for their ability to pollinate and make honey, etc. but they're treacherous little creatures and wouldn't hesitate to sting. They get no sympathy from me. If the bees need a good PR agent, they should definitely see you. Excellent 5-7-5 format. judi
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Judi, was giving this a look. Not a bee lover?
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You're welcome. Can't say that I am a bee lover. I did read an interesting story about Carl Killion, who because a beekeeper and noted authority on bees in the early 20th century. judi
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and cute 5-7-5 poem about the bee. You used very cute and good wording. You used very good imagery with the picture of the bee! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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This is a very interesting and cute 5-7-5 poem about the bee. You used very cute and good wording. You used very good imagery with the picture of the bee! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wonderful bee story Bill, they are such industrious little creatures always obeying the call of nature, your poem is funny and made me smile, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Wonderful bee story Bill, they are such industrious little creatures always obeying the call of nature, your poem is funny and made me smile, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from apky
So correct.
Nature designed and esignated.
A little tap, a little buzz, even and the flower
is frenetic. All over the bee, knowing what is good and right.
Excellent, even if my mind always skews stuff a little.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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So correct.
Nature designed and esignated.
A little tap, a little buzz, even and the flower
is frenetic. All over the bee, knowing what is good and right.
Excellent, even if my mind always skews stuff a little.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thanks, apky. I was hesitant to post.8
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"designed and designated" - I think I need to slow down my typing. Better still, edit.