Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

I like it. For years it has been said the pen is mightier than the sword. Good job calling people to action against evil in a constructive way. Good job with the 1-6-1 construction, and rhyming, I know it can be difficult.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you for your insights.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A clever write for the 1-6-1 contest, yes the pen is mightier than the sword! Wise words and I wish you luck with this little gem of a poem, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank you;

Comment from Jean Lutz

Exceptional

So much said in so few words. Many Christian denominations are now observing a time called Lent. A time for reflection, fasting and repenting. I have been reading in the Bible about the 40 days Jesus spent in the wilderness. How the Devil tempted him. In that first temptation, Jesus overcame not with his words, but quoting the words of God. Best wishes with your entry.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank you for offering your insightful review. Man
must live not on bread alone, but on the Word of God.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a great entry for the 1-6-1 contest prompt. The picture of the bright, golden sword really enhances your verse. It would be a good weapon in a fight. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank you!