Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Lovely Limerick Bill, a fun picture of Collin the bee painted drifting from flower to flower, particularly enjoyed your dialogue which embraces the humorous imagery.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, Mitchell

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Though I'm not a limerick expert, I think the first line could be a couple of syllables more. It's the third and fourth lines which are short. I like the creative "awayin'"

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Looks scary to me. This is one Bee I will be giving a wide berth. I was stung, by a swarm of wasps back when I was a kid and I have been told that If I ever receive more than one bite now, it might seem me into a state of shock, possibly resulting in my death. so I try to avoid sting insects of all type. I even swell up from the bite of an ant.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks, nomi. Don?t get bit.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting limerick you have penned about the bee! I love the picture you chose to go with your very good and descriptive words. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I smiled when I saw whose poem I was about to review. And I laughed out loud at your bee named Collin. You and your poems are a blessing to me. I'll be callin' on all of your poetry in the future.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

You?re very kind, Debbie

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Bill;
Great shot of the evil bandit, the bee. He does a lot of hit and runs, doesn't he? He will nuzzle up, take the pollen, and run. He certainly doesn't stay for a meal or anything.

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks, Patty, for giving this a look. Bill