Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Trisha,

Kittens are the most wonderful things to watch, aren't they? This video is incredibly sweet, and your poem was a pleasant companion for watching,

~patty~

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thanks very much,
Hugs, Trish

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a funny thought the kitten makes seeing the fly in the room it quickly ran to play outdoors; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Good morning, Al
Not one of Mubarak?s best Posts, but the video is cute!
Thanks for reviewing, Trisha

Comment from Trudi Perkins

Excellent

This is an interesting poem indeed. I love the picture you've chosen also. Kitties rule.Thanks for sharing your lovely poem with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and very cute poem about the kitten and the fly. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery with the picture of the pretty cat! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank you very much, have a healthy great day
Hugs, Trisha