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Comment from Ulla
Yikes, Bill, I don't quite know what to make of this well written little story. To me it sounds as if we have to avoid cockroaches at all cost. Or else!!!
Well, I rather avoid them. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Yikes, Bill, I don't quite know what to make of this well written little story. To me it sounds as if we have to avoid cockroaches at all cost. Or else!!!
Well, I rather avoid them. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and cute little story about the cockroaches. The only way I can look at them over than disgust is in your funny and cute little stories. Great words and imagery! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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This is a very interesting and cute little story about the cockroaches. The only way I can look at them over than disgust is in your funny and cute little stories. Great words and imagery! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bill
You have a humorouw story about the Giant cockroach and named her Connie, wonder if she knows that Donald that could work as an exterminator, eliminating such pests (like her).
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Hello Bill
You have a humorouw story about the Giant cockroach and named her Connie, wonder if she knows that Donald that could work as an exterminator, eliminating such pests (like her).
Gert
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Gert. They seem to be on good terms.
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You are welcome
nice to know they are getting along with each other
Gert
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaaa, that's funny. Juggling severed heads, I've never seen that before, but then I guess I don't get out enough. I remember Mimic quite well and the young fella imitating the cockroach sounds with his spoons.
Excellent story and highly unique. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Haaaaaaa, that's funny. Juggling severed heads, I've never seen that before, but then I guess I don't get out enough. I remember Mimic quite well and the young fella imitating the cockroach sounds with his spoons.
Excellent story and highly unique. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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A nice bedtime story.
Comment from nomi338
Call it a turning of the worm. Worlds switch, black becomes white, old becomes young again, the weak gains strength. The unintelligent gains wisdom and pulls those reluctant to move ahead along with them. What that really means is that you and I get to a desired place.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Call it a turning of the worm. Worlds switch, black becomes white, old becomes young again, the weak gains strength. The unintelligent gains wisdom and pulls those reluctant to move ahead along with them. What that really means is that you and I get to a desired place.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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...and Trump could be ?elected? president...
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
All those dead bodies! Roaches, I hope. Why is Connie juggling heads? And is SHE the one who decapitated the poor roaches she's juggling? A lot of mystery here, not to mention a parallel universe. Definitely enough for a novel. So... on to chapter two! :)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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All those dead bodies! Roaches, I hope. Why is Connie juggling heads? And is SHE the one who decapitated the poor roaches she's juggling? A lot of mystery here, not to mention a parallel universe. Definitely enough for a novel. So... on to chapter two! :)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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I?m afraid we?re done with roaches.
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What? No more roaches? I read that they're going to take over the world once we humans are gone. Maybe they're just going to rest up. :)
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my! The parallel universe thing - seems more like the waking and the dreaming times are reversed. But then, that is how a "parallel universe" works sometimes. Interesting and bizarre.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Oh my! The parallel universe thing - seems more like the waking and the dreaming times are reversed. But then, that is how a "parallel universe" works sometimes. Interesting and bizarre.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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...and somewhere cockroaches are disliked.
Comment from damommy
He handled Constance in just the right way. She cleaned up and was quiet, allowing him to sleep. She doesn't know what he may do for a living.
The thought of being in a tunnel with a giant cockroach may scare me for life. lol
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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He handled Constance in just the right way. She cleaned up and was quiet, allowing him to sleep. She doesn't know what he may do for a living.
The thought of being in a tunnel with a giant cockroach may scare me for life. lol
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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They make it work.
Comment from frogbook
A weird and ironic story here my friend with your own brand of humor. LOL. Quite original and clever and a wild addition to your series.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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A weird and ironic story here my friend with your own brand of humor. LOL. Quite original and clever and a wild addition to your series.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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That caps it.
Comment from tfawcus
It sounds as if you've been watching too many horror movies! Sometimes our dreams take us into dark places and it is good to wake to reality again! I remember living in an old wooden house in Singapore years ago with cockroaches in every corner. You never saw them during the day, but turning a light on in the middle of the night revealed the creepy crawly truth!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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It sounds as if you've been watching too many horror movies! Sometimes our dreams take us into dark places and it is good to wake to reality again! I remember living in an old wooden house in Singapore years ago with cockroaches in every corner. You never saw them during the day, but turning a light on in the middle of the night revealed the creepy crawly truth!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Tony