Things Left Unsaid
If only I could undo that moment...27 total reviews
Comment from Writingfundimension
I can see why this monostitch won the contest for you! I've been looking back on past words both said and unsaid, so your poem comes at the right time for me. Very well done, and congratulations.
:) Bev
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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I can see why this monostitch won the contest for you! I've been looking back on past words both said and unsaid, so your poem comes at the right time for me. Very well done, and congratulations.
:) Bev
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Bev, and welcome back. I haven't talked to you for a very long time.
Bev, I do hope and pray that things are going well for you. Drop me a line anytime. Have a great weekend...Bill
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Hi, Bill
Glad to be back, and thank you for your kind wishes and warm welcome, my friend.
:) Bev
Comment from Henry King
Review by Henry: What can one say but; "Congratulations Bill, this work was well done." Ten syllables, no more and no less is needed. Thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Review by Henry: What can one say but; "Congratulations Bill, this work was well done." Ten syllables, no more and no less is needed. Thank you.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Hello Henry: Thank you for your wonderful review and rating, I really appreciate it.
I would also like to welcome you to Fanstory. I'm in my tenth year here. So, if I can be of any help or answer any questions you might have, please let me know. Have a great weekend Henry...Bill
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Reply by Henry: You are welcome. Thank you for your invite.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good wish. I have often wished I had a time machine so I could go back and undo some of my mistakes. I wonder though, would I be any farther ahead?
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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A very good wish. I have often wished I had a time machine so I could go back and undo some of my mistakes. I wonder though, would I be any farther ahead?
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Thomas, for your comments...You make a very good point. If had a time machine available to me I would set the date for the very first stop on the day after my graduation from high school. That's when I realized that I would soon be involved in the Vietnam war. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from LIJ Red
In most things there is a pivot point, when it is time to bet it all-recognizing it is tough. Contest winner-who am I to argue with that success. Looks right to me.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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In most things there is a pivot point, when it is time to bet it all-recognizing it is tough. Contest winner-who am I to argue with that success. Looks right to me.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Thanks Red for your excellent review, I really appreciate it. Have a nice day...Bill
Comment from royowen
And sometimes perhaps if we'd left some things unsaid it may also have saved a relationship. But yes, sometimes sheer pride can result in things we should have said and didn't, great effort. No wonder this won the contest, well done Bill, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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And sometimes perhaps if we'd left some things unsaid it may also have saved a relationship. But yes, sometimes sheer pride can result in things we should have said and didn't, great effort. No wonder this won the contest, well done Bill, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Roy, for your excellent review. I appreciate your comments. There are so many marriages that end suddenly without giving each other a second chance. Have a great day...Bill
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That's true my friend
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi there is no doubt about it, sometimes things are meant to be said or done in time or dire consequences follow. It is a truth we need to keep in our mind. This is a brilliant advice, I shall myself remember it.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hi there is no doubt about it, sometimes things are meant to be said or done in time or dire consequences follow. It is a truth we need to keep in our mind. This is a brilliant advice, I shall myself remember it.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Danny, for your excellent review. I appreciate it. This is something we all should remember. Thanks again Danny and have a great day. Bill
Comment from Pantygynt
You are on a winning streak at the moment. It is easy to see why with this monostitch. If you had said it it might have been a monostitch in time, but there you go you can't win them all. And what's a marriage when there's poetry about?
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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You are on a winning streak at the moment. It is easy to see why with this monostitch. If you had said it it might have been a monostitch in time, but there you go you can't win them all. And what's a marriage when there's poetry about?
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you, my friend, for your excellent review. I appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from crzypnter
Hi Bill
This is a great message and I can easily see why this was the winner. I'm sure that many would agree that they would love too undo something they did. Way too often people don't express their feelings to one another and it just builds until one goes off. The next thing you no the marriage is over. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill
This is a great message and I can easily see why this was the winner. I'm sure that many would agree that they would love too undo something they did. Way too often people don't express their feelings to one another and it just builds until one goes off. The next thing you no the marriage is over. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you, August, for your fantastic review. I really appreciate it. Have a great day my friend...Bill
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I'm really bad at expressing my feelings. I can be crying but asked what's wrong I'll say it's nothing. My husband is really good at pulling them out of me. I think sometimes the moment overcomes us and that can leave us speechless. *Hugs*
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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I'm really bad at expressing my feelings. I can be crying but asked what's wrong I'll say it's nothing. My husband is really good at pulling them out of me. I think sometimes the moment overcomes us and that can leave us speechless. *Hugs*
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your very touching review, I appreciate it. You're very lucky to have such an understanding husband. Take care...Bill
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi!
A fine contest entry and winner.
Hindsight is a wonderful thing and honesty and truth often so hard to define and voice to another.
Still it is easy to see and understand how the inability to voice these words led to a marriage breakdown.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Hi!
A fine contest entry and winner.
Hindsight is a wonderful thing and honesty and truth often so hard to define and voice to another.
Still it is easy to see and understand how the inability to voice these words led to a marriage breakdown.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Shirley, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I totally agree with you. Have a great day...Bill