Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

"Wake Up World Of Mine!"
"Stop your unnecessary boozing, stealing, raping, and murdering!"
"Stop your unnecessary disregard for My Word!"

That says it all

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018

Thanks for this and your wonderful review and time again.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks messages from above; warning; man should not commit crimes against humanity, misuse, cause harm to God's world; man should follow and live per God's words, rules; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. WRITE CHANGE. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018

Thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I must applaud the sheer effort that went into this work. However long did it take you? I found it very clever, especially the Devil's Bible, even noting where the Bible was found for authenticity. I certainly have no suggestions for improvements. I found it remarkable.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thanks Debbie the Devil's Bible which was written on August 26th 2013 took about 20 minutes to write that was a time and written piece I haven't been timing my pieces so much if it is less than 10 minutes as a Slam Poet I may bring in the fact how many minutes but I don't really promote that anymore I rather just promote my writings and let them rest on the ability not the time it took to write it and thanks for your review talk to Ricky 1024

reply by Debbie Pope on 12-Feb-2018

Well, I am still impressed.