Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Our inner child dictates a lot about us, it makes some major plans that we are unaware of . I love this piece as it reminds me of whatwould make me happy and give me peace. Very well done

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thanks so much barb, your continued support comments and friendship. Lot to me. It is a pleasure in an honor to write with you here.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Comment from apky

Excellent

A wonderful and thoughtful story not only for your boss but for most people.

I came away with a lot, especiall the last three stanzas. May I copy them to pin on my office wall - for those days when I need cheering up?

Because nothing lasts,
and the future is vast-
to glimpse, look in the mirror

There you will view
that which to do-
as your dreams are nurtured

And you become imbued,
with the old and the new-
in a way that creates your future


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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thanks or your kind comments, its great to hear from you. Yes he certainly have my permission and I am honored that you found my poem uplifting. I just finished the last six dances last night I want of the first two to do with the now the second to to deal with the past and then the last pair to do with the future. I am so happy that I accomplish that goal, and honored that you would choose it to post
Blessings,

Brother Badger

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

dances=stanzas~

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a lovely poem for your boss and hope they were impressed with your words. There is a child in all of us and at times we have those moments when we remember our own innocence, a joyful read, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thanks for your corn words, friendship, and consistent support Blessings,
Brother Badger