Inner (inside-out) Child
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Comment from patcelaw
When we are able to let go of our past and still be able to say we have learned a lesson from it, in my opinion important to living a healthy and peaceful life.
Nicely worded poem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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When we are able to let go of our past and still be able to say we have learned a lesson from it, in my opinion important to living a healthy and peaceful life.
Nicely worded poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much for your kind review and parallels.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from June Sargent
Putting our past experiences through a sieve to eliminate the ones that are simply dead weight is genius! Then we keep the good, blending that innocent inner child with newly acquired wisdom to be the best person you can be. A work in progress.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Putting our past experiences through a sieve to eliminate the ones that are simply dead weight is genius! Then we keep the good, blending that innocent inner child with newly acquired wisdom to be the best person you can be. A work in progress.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much for your kind comments.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from w.j.debi
Although you wrote this for another time and occasion, it fits the times now very well. We have much to be grateful for and should focus on that. Now is all we have, no matter the circumstances.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Although you wrote this for another time and occasion, it fits the times now very well. We have much to be grateful for and should focus on that. Now is all we have, no matter the circumstances.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much I appreciate your comments.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this, Darren. The stanzas and simple and they ring of an innocence. Each one seems to show us both the struggle of living this life but also the spiritual reality of God Who cares about us. Virtual six!
"because It's Maker cares" (Its)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Loved this, Darren. The stanzas and simple and they ring of an innocence. Each one seems to show us both the struggle of living this life but also the spiritual reality of God Who cares about us. Virtual six!
"because It's Maker cares" (Its)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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What would I do without you?
Darren
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You'd do just fine! :)
Comment from Janetsue
Your boss had to have loved this striking poem written in his honor. I had someone write a poem for me when I was in my early twenties and I still have it. You have a special gift and you were very kind to honor your boss with this encouraging work. :-)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Your boss had to have loved this striking poem written in his honor. I had someone write a poem for me when I was in my early twenties and I still have it. You have a special gift and you were very kind to honor your boss with this encouraging work. :-)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks I'm honored. Enjoy these comments.
HAND
(Have A Nice Day)
Darren
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Listen to your inner child, get the way, right to the future, creating a path to lead the way to make the dream come true, experience all webs and states of living, positively and diversely; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Listen to your inner child, get the way, right to the future, creating a path to lead the way to make the dream come true, experience all webs and states of living, positively and diversely; well said, well done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much Doctor, I appreciate your comments.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Wendy Winter
This poem embodies many of the themes I have stumbled opon today while being instructed in a yoga workout and also in a self help book a picked up for a few minutes today. I even heard a phychologist on an Opera podcast mention inner child this morning. Your beautifully chosen words are a well recieved medium for this theme the universe is currently raining down on me. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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This poem embodies many of the themes I have stumbled opon today while being instructed in a yoga workout and also in a self help book a picked up for a few minutes today. I even heard a phychologist on an Opera podcast mention inner child this morning. Your beautifully chosen words are a well recieved medium for this theme the universe is currently raining down on me. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much for your time and consideration.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from royowen
Hi Darren, what a lovely poem, I don't think I've ever lost my inner child, and I think it's similar for others also, this has captured that analogy perfectly my friend, I know my daughters, (natural mothers that they are) sometimes treat me accordingly, but it displays their love not anything else. Praise God for mums. Well done my friend, you kept up the rhyming perfectly, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Hi Darren, what a lovely poem, I don't think I've ever lost my inner child, and I think it's similar for others also, this has captured that analogy perfectly my friend, I know my daughters, (natural mothers that they are) sometimes treat me accordingly, but it displays their love not anything else. Praise God for mums. Well done my friend, you kept up the rhyming perfectly, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much for working with me on this. I really appreciate your comments.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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Well done Darren
Comment from happykat4
I like the questioning journey the poem take on in growing up. The art of rhyme was good in aab, ccb,dde, ffe, is how I found the patterns. The artwork chosen compliments the written words nicely. We do learn from our mistakes and what we nurture, our dreams, who we become is a direct reflection. Nice work. Kat
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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I like the questioning journey the poem take on in growing up. The art of rhyme was good in aab, ccb,dde, ffe, is how I found the patterns. The artwork chosen compliments the written words nicely. We do learn from our mistakes and what we nurture, our dreams, who we become is a direct reflection. Nice work. Kat
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Thanks for the warm review and detailed comments,. I really appreciate your feedback.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from karenina
I ama huge advocate of letting our inner child out yo play ehenever possible. Take him to the park, climb in the Monkey Bars yo defy gtoen up gravity....just don't linger yo long on yhe "mood swings."
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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I ama huge advocate of letting our inner child out yo play ehenever possible. Take him to the park, climb in the Monkey Bars yo defy gtoen up gravity....just don't linger yo long on yhe "mood swings."
Karenina
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Thanks for the warm review and detailed comments,. I really appreciate your feedback.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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My pleasure to read your work.....
