Comment from bhogg

Excellent

Badger--I enjoyed your post. It flowed so smoothly with a pleasant rhyme scheme. Loved your message, beyond your 'a grand revoloution'. Have not read your posts before. Glad I stopped for this one. Bill

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Hey Bill thanks so much for your warm words.


Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is an interesting and thought-provoking poem, flowing as it does through one's life, one's changing attitudes and thoughts, and offering positive conclusions and advice for living. Thoughtfully written.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly

Excellent

An insightful glimpse into a mind that has accepted that childish thoughts can be relevant but should be tempered by the adults experiences too. Thank you.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

I love the flow and meter of this poem. It reads perfectly when read aloud, which is how I like to enjoy poetry. Too bad that we don't all let our inner self show more often.
Happy Easter
Patty

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments oh, and a very happy Easter to you!

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.


Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

I really liked this poem about the inner n outer child! I found the author's
words deep, interesting, spiritual and creative. I really fount the stanza
look to him referring to God which for me is the only way to know which way to go. These words have some worthwhile message. Thank you for the author's notes. Happy Easter!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from prodigal

Exceptional

This is just rock solid rhyme and meter. I really like the aab aab style. None of your poem feels forced, the words flow naturally.

Judging writing is like judging ice skating. You have the technical and the artistic. On the technical this is a ten. The artistic is very good as well, but the flow of this poem is first class. Cudos- Sam

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Sam you made my day. I was just kidding, judging you is like ice skating and your review skated as smoothly as well polished steel upon Frozen Glide okay thanks so much for your warm, and you shine you review I really appreciate the fix cars it was play Smooth mellow Smoky flavor of my Glenlivet single malt inviting and inciting my pallet.

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem that is so celebratory. I think we all need to release our inner child, the world would be a better place for it. Thank you for this uplifting poem. :)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks for stopping by I really appreciate your continued support here! Happy Easter
Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from F. William Lester

Exceptional

Happy Easter to you and thank you for a very well written, uplifting, poem. Timely and so very positive at a time when we need it most. Great work. Thanks for sharing it. Stay well.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Mr. Lester, your warm review is preceded only my cordial and inviting expression bring your face, some of us is that for Life enjoy for living and stages in my poem, thank you so much for your shining six stars do Shine Review you truly made my Sunday a very special Easter.
Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

reply by F. William Lester on 05-Apr-2021

You're very welcome

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

What a great theme you have addressed. To use the time-worn phrase, " the eyes are the window of the world." you have essentially You many juxtapositions are the crux of the whole poem and the meaning intended and interpreted. The readers will identify with the speaker because everyone has at one time or another experienced a similar situation or similar struggles or emotions. well expressed

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020

Thanks so much lose your comments are the icing on my day!

Darren

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I think my inner child is free, I just don't let her out. She gets in trouble, or would get in trouble. lol. You did a great job with this and I think letting go of the past is hard. But it's sometimes what holds us back. Great job

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

thanks so much for your comments, I like your monitor and always enjoy meeting new authors here. A pleasure and an honor to write with you here.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren