Inner (inside-out) Child
A fresh, new scheme53 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems like a thank you to a mentor and encouraging him to see with the eyes of a child but still use the wisdom of age.
This poem has a different rhyme scheme but it still flows well. The single line seems to break the poem into two different themes.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Hope you had a nice Easter too.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
  |
This seems like a thank you to a mentor and encouraging him to see with the eyes of a child but still use the wisdom of age.
This poem has a different rhyme scheme but it still flows well. The single line seems to break the poem into two different themes.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Hope you had a nice Easter too.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
-
Thank you for the wonderful review stripe on the door light
-
Don't mention it.
dp
Comment from nomi338
Any adult who does not make peace with the child that he was, and is unable to coexist with the memory of his childhood, will never be a fully functioning adult. Truly the part of our life that was spent as a child, learning and developing, hopefully absorbing the lesson that life was trying to teach us, should have been the pad that launched us into adulthood. This is a wonderful poem that should be a teachable vehicle capable of driving us forward.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
 |
Any adult who does not make peace with the child that he was, and is unable to coexist with the memory of his childhood, will never be a fully functioning adult. Truly the part of our life that was spent as a child, learning and developing, hopefully absorbing the lesson that life was trying to teach us, should have been the pad that launched us into adulthood. This is a wonderful poem that should be a teachable vehicle capable of driving us forward.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
-
Thank you so very sorry for you as I have received some of your views before cobbler I wish to clever in one find it difficult to find the time if I want to make a run a fart Sublime and I have valuable your input is to me I would give you seven stars on the review!
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Leann DS
There is so much in this poem. Inner child, letting go of but learning from the past, looking toward the future, he insignificance of life but yet how important it is in this exact moment, and looking to God who has all the answers. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
|
There is so much in this poem. Inner child, letting go of but learning from the past, looking toward the future, he insignificance of life but yet how important it is in this exact moment, and looking to God who has all the answers. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
-
Thanks I appreciate you review sorry for the delay
Comment from QC Poet
Happy Easter, Wow - as a Hitting 60 this year guy, I see A Beautiful mix of great lyrist. This in an Excellent expansion beyond them (John Lennon & Marvin Gaye plus more) into poetry. Blessings to you, and Thank you for Sharing your work.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
|
Happy Easter, Wow - as a Hitting 60 this year guy, I see A Beautiful mix of great lyrist. This in an Excellent expansion beyond them (John Lennon & Marvin Gaye plus more) into poetry. Blessings to you, and Thank you for Sharing your work.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
-
I am truly honored, and regret that I don't have enough time to tell you exactly how I feel but I am truly honored to write with you in this exciting space and wish you the best and hope to find time to read your work and review it in the future.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
-
I am truly honored, and regret that I don't have enough time to tell you exactly how I feel but I am truly honored to write with you in this exciting space and wish you the best and hope to find time to read your work and review it in the future.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
-
I am truly honored, and regret that I don't have enough time to tell you exactly how I feel but I am truly honored to write with you in this exciting space and wish you the best and hope to find time to read your work and review it in the future.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Janice Canerdy
If we could give 7's, this one would have a 7! Your poem is superb in every respect. It conveys a powerful message about living, learning (sometimes the hard way), and learning what really matters durimg our brief sojourn on
Earth. The style is excellent and appealing--rhyme, meter, etc. A delight to read!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
|
If we could give 7's, this one would have a 7! Your poem is superb in every respect. It conveys a powerful message about living, learning (sometimes the hard way), and learning what really matters durimg our brief sojourn on
Earth. The style is excellent and appealing--rhyme, meter, etc. A delight to read!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
-
A pleasure and an honor, I haven't gotten very many sevens.
Thank you so much for your phone review and I pray that in the Mist mercatus I will find time to read your work and can be exactly what this review means to me. In the meantime I'm in the middle of a forest of bristly doubt
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I liked how you went through the years of your life, your thoughts, and faith. We must look to our past to learn from our mistakes, and the good things to cherish. You write all your thoughts so clearly, then end with your wonderful author's notes. An excellent poem, and a pleasure to read. Well done, Badger. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
|
I liked how you went through the years of your life, your thoughts, and faith. We must look to our past to learn from our mistakes, and the good things to cherish. You write all your thoughts so clearly, then end with your wonderful author's notes. An excellent poem, and a pleasure to read. Well done, Badger. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
-
Thanks Andrew I appreciate your wonderful review sorry for the delay
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A wonderfully worded and expressively penned poem. Well done. In our souls, we should remain children who never cared for anything. but saw a world full of love and rainbows. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
|
A wonderfully worded and expressively penned poem. Well done. In our souls, we should remain children who never cared for anything. but saw a world full of love and rainbows. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
Thank you for your warm comments; A pleasure and an honor to write with you here.
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective,
& I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Possummagic
It's a brilliantly written piece and I'm happy to see that it's been influenced by the Stoke your brother Bruce suffered. Or perhaps it was almost there and this spurred you on. It's certainly well deserving of the 6 star rating. Happy Easter.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
|
It's a brilliantly written piece and I'm happy to see that it's been influenced by the Stoke your brother Bruce suffered. Or perhaps it was almost there and this spurred you on. It's certainly well deserving of the 6 star rating. Happy Easter.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
Thank you for your warm comments; A pleasure and an honor to write with you here.
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective,
& I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
-
Thank you I?ll try to pop by. Marie x
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is exceptional work. As if by prophecy, you have written this predicting the trying times we have been facing during this past year with COVID and the changing of one president to another. Your title, "Inner (inside-out) Child" is brilliant and sets up the long piece that is definitely worth reading!
So much is said, and the rhymes are fantastic and out of this world! The rhymes of "balance" and "talents" are very clever and show a talented poet in his own groove!
I cannot say enough about this poem but suffice to say that it has proven to be the best offering on this site today!
Have a wonderful upcoming week!
Jesse
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
|
This is exceptional work. As if by prophecy, you have written this predicting the trying times we have been facing during this past year with COVID and the changing of one president to another. Your title, "Inner (inside-out) Child" is brilliant and sets up the long piece that is definitely worth reading!
So much is said, and the rhymes are fantastic and out of this world! The rhymes of "balance" and "talents" are very clever and show a talented poet in his own groove!
I cannot say enough about this poem but suffice to say that it has proven to be the best offering on this site today!
Have a wonderful upcoming week!
Jesse
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
Thank you for your warm comments; A pleasure and an honor to write with you here.
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective,
& I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
-
Hello Darren, I am glad to meet you! Your in-depth reply to my review is a welcome sight. I often receive a curt and brief reply, to my thorough reviews, and it is unsatisfying, to say the least. I really appreciate your thoughtful words and interesting comments. You show yourself to be a talented writer and it is with a sigh of relief, that I find this poem among the rest that merely guess at a haiku and other styles of poetry.
I am interested in looking at your portfolio for your stream of haikus and other clever posts. Thank you for entering my world, and have a wonderful week, what's left of it.
Jesse
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed reading your poem and authors notes. This stanza stood out the most for me:
"Because nothing lasts,
and the future is vast-
to glimpse, look in the mirror"
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
|
I enjoyed reading your poem and authors notes. This stanza stood out the most for me:
"Because nothing lasts,
and the future is vast-
to glimpse, look in the mirror"
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
Thank you for your warm comments
A pleasure and an honor to write with you here
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective
I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
