Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

The unusual rhyming of this poem, both in terms of structure and of the actual words used, is a delight. It certainly is a fresh new scheme, as you promised us. Well worth the wait!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

1 it's always nice to get a fresh perspective on my writing, I get so many interesting viewpoints And everybody has a very vital and valuable puzzle piece~

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most.

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.


Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

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Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Well done! I enjoyed reading this poem. I have just started on this site recently and poems have never really held my interest. However, I've read quite a few and though there were some I didn't care for, this isn't one of them. I think you expressed yourself well. Keep up the good work.

Tom

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

1 it's always nice to get a fresh perspective on my writing, I get so many interesting viewpoints And everybody has a very vital and valuable puzzle piece~

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most.

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.


Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

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Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Well done, a little long, but thoroughly enjoyable, and a nice rhythm throughout.
I read your author's notes and was touched by your brother Bruce and his validation.
Bravo.
This work almost sounds like a song in parts, such was the harmony.
Well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

1 it's always nice to get a fresh perspective on my writing, I get so many interesting viewpoints And everybody has a very vital and valuable puzzle piece~

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most.

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.


Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

~ ? : - D ~

Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

What a good reminder to seek the inner child within. Didn't Jesus say to be like little children and look to God, our Father to guide us in our life? I like your rhyme and your message. And Happy Easter SEASON to you. It ain't over yet!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

1 it's always nice to get a fresh perspective on my writing, I get so many interesting viewpoints And everybody has a very vital and valuable puzzle piece~

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most.

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.


Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

~ ? : - D ~

Comment from Vanna1

Excellent

A nice heart warning piece. Good presentation. The rhymes are good and you have some good word choice. That little child within is a good theme. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm review is a pleasure and an honor to write with you here. Sorry it took me so long to answer your review it is always a pleasure to meet new Authors here.

Blessings

Brother Badger Cull

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Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Darren,

How nice! I do like this poetry format - it's a cool one, and one I've used from time to time. Not that often because it is a bit of a pain after a bit - so I'm impressed that you've carried it so far. And I must tell you that my favorite rhyme pair here were errors/mirror. That was unexpected and quite creative. It may end up being a bit of a slant rhyme to those who are perfectionists, but I love half (slant) rhymes, too, and use them all the time.

One tiny note:
--> because (i)ts Maker cares

Thanks!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

Hey Robin is a pleasure to get your reviews and I really enjoyed this one but very good review in depth and I really appreciate your help with my punctuation.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

hello
a well written peom, that will reach many people and many will relate to.
It was an interesting way to use three lines with the one line as a sort of exclamation line.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021

Thanks so much I am backlog sorry for the delay

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello Badger, this is a very well composed group of three line poems. Each one gives a message and could stand along. I particularly like - As my shell gets older,
my spirit grows bolder;
absorbing wisdom and truth....... Very good. An overall good poem.
Thank you for posting - warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021

Thanks so much for loosening the part you like I appreciate your review sorry for the delay

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

I'll be honest and say that I don't often have the patience to read long poems, but your first verse captured my attention and made me want to keep reading. I really enjoyed your rhyme scheme. Combined with the short lines, it gave your poem a very enjoyable bouncy quality. The words themselves are very interesting, for it sounds as though you're figuring out life and your place in it and, along the way, discovered a higher power. Each verse had me wanting to read the next - not a small feat in view of what I said about my impatience with long poems.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021

In that case I'm truly honored, they say that he had pleasure to ride with you here. Thank you for the going on with you!

Blessings

on with you!

Blessings

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

reply by Michele Harber on 06-Apr-2021

😀

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

A fresh, new scheme
Inner (inside-out) Child
by Badger_29

Excellent poem :)

I can relate to this...

we must learn to strike a balance

Between sunshine and rain,
sane mind, and insane;
and to cultivate our talents

We all have an inner child we should care for.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021

Thanks Gypsy I cherish the top of the world