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The Life of Mrs. Armstrong

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Comment from lyenochka
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How wonderful that you made sure that Andrea had a healthy lunch. It was good that she didn't want to impose on you. But she happily did her chores and even made you an interesting sandwich with jam added to ham! As for my own grown kid, I could never get her to do those kinds of chores. So I'm glad Andrea did.
Your class sounds so fun - so I'm glad I get a glimpse of your class this way!

Tomorrows' plan was to start (Tomorrow's)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much for enjoying Andrea and your great comments. It is funny isn't it that we can depend on strangers to be thoughtful? I will fix this in a moment. Hugs n smiles!
Comment from Pantygynt
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Perhaps because I hid behind the door in biology lessons but I do find the detail of these interesting. You were a loss to the teaching profession in my opinion. I had one problem though with this bit:

"The answers were well formulated. The only group was the one who unfortunately had the bone from a rather large chicken and they identified it as a thigh when it was really a wing bone." I think there is something missing fro the first half of the second sentence here. Something like "who got anything wrong". Am I right?

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much for reviewing, now for some reason I do not believe the idea of you hiding behind a door during biology. I agree that adding that simple phrase will make a significant difference, I am so glad you caught it.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Interesting piece. We can learn a lot from this book. What bone in a chicken or turkey is the one called the wish bone? What is that soft reddish brown stuff inside of a chicken bone?

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks so much for reviewing this chapter Phyllis, Great questions, now the first is simply the wish bone, I wonder if it replaces the collar bone in us? Now the second is a form of marrow. ta da some days I amaze myself. Again thanks.
Comment from Zue65
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I like the way the study of the bones is presented to the readers and sound so much interesting. I didn't know bone structure and its study can sound like an adventure. This proves that the author is skilled and an expert in story telling. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciated and enjoyed your comments.