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Comment from judiverse
As far as I'm concerned, let all those roaches live in Texas. Cute bouncy rhyme in this. I'll check the Yellow Pages, but I don't believe we have any Roach Geek services listed here. Great ending, depending on the roach to get all the other bugs out. Meanwhile, the critter has probably decided to take up residence in your cabinet. At least he'll be handy if you have any more problems with your computer. judi
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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As far as I'm concerned, let all those roaches live in Texas. Cute bouncy rhyme in this. I'll check the Yellow Pages, but I don't believe we have any Roach Geek services listed here. Great ending, depending on the roach to get all the other bugs out. Meanwhile, the critter has probably decided to take up residence in your cabinet. At least he'll be handy if you have any more problems with your computer. judi
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Judi, for the neat review. Bill
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You're very welcome, Bill. Who knows what those cockroaches will be up to next? judi
Comment from nomi338
What a clever approach, use a roach to find a roach. Oh man what a bugaboo. I am here to tell you. I am really bugging out. I am about to shout. Hidey, hidey ho. It's time for the bugs to go.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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What a clever approach, use a roach to find a roach. Oh man what a bugaboo. I am here to tell you. I am really bugging out. I am about to shout. Hidey, hidey ho. It's time for the bugs to go.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thanks, nomi, for getting into the 'beet'le.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bill Smiles
I must say I looked up to see what a was a geek
squad roach and found out
Sounds like to me they use nymphs,
(baby cockroaches - to battle away with the other bugs. Wonder if that is how we end up with these unknown virus in our computers?
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Hello Bill Smiles
I must say I looked up to see what a was a geek
squad roach and found out
Sounds like to me they use nymphs,
(baby cockroaches - to battle away with the other bugs. Wonder if that is how we end up with these unknown virus in our computers?
Gert
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Gert, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. Well this is a trick that I'd rather not use to get rid of the bugs in my computer with the use of another bug. Clever, innovative and amusing. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill. Well this is a trick that I'd rather not use to get rid of the bugs in my computer with the use of another bug. Clever, innovative and amusing. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Marilyn
Comment from brenda faye curtis
As always, Bill, bouncy rhythms filled with fun!
It is interesting how we've adapted our language to refer to computer problems in terms of bugs and viruses. Is that germophobia, I wonder?
At any rate, a good addition to cockroach world.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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As always, Bill, bouncy rhythms filled with fun!
It is interesting how we've adapted our language to refer to computer problems in terms of bugs and viruses. Is that germophobia, I wonder?
At any rate, a good addition to cockroach world.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thanks, BFC
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from dragonpoet
I never knew that 'roach' was a nickname for computer technicians from Best Buy or the Geek Squad. But they do get all the bugs out. Just like real roaches that seem to live through anything other bugs succumb to.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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I never knew that 'roach' was a nickname for computer technicians from Best Buy or the Geek Squad. But they do get all the bugs out. Just like real roaches that seem to live through anything other bugs succumb to.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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There should be a stock market it3m for cockroaches.
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They would probably be the strongest and most growing stock. Also, with the most longevity for they are said to be the only living things that can survive a nuclear attack.
Joan
Comment from ameen786
Hey my friend, first, sorry that I am out of sixes; to me this is a perfect 10. I had a long laugh with my grand children reading your amusing and wonderful, crafty poem. Superb flow with excellent rhymes; thank you for the treat but no cockroaches, please.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hey my friend, first, sorry that I am out of sixes; to me this is a perfect 10. I had a long laugh with my grand children reading your amusing and wonderful, crafty poem. Superb flow with excellent rhymes; thank you for the treat but no cockroaches, please.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks, ameen
Comment from damommy
Hahahaha. Right up there with my cat looking for the mouse I speak of.
I think I'll wait for the Geeks, if you don't mind. The roach might decide to take up residence in my computer. 8-)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hahahaha. Right up there with my cat looking for the mouse I speak of.
I think I'll wait for the Geeks, if you don't mind. The roach might decide to take up residence in my computer. 8-)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks, da, for the fun review. Bill
Comment from Cass Carlton
Dear Bill, of all the six legged creatures in God's creation there is NOTHING so revolting as a COCKROACH! Ugh! Eeyeeew! Trust you to write poetry about such loathsome beasts. I was going to respond to the last piece you presented about Jeff Bezos and a cockroach, but my gorge rose and I decided to express my feelings with this piece. You have a talent for making the unattractive seem interesting, and worth writing about, as your efforts with Walruses and other species of creatures
has shown, My efforts are mainly of the "flowers and pussycats" genre so I admire your choice of subject as adventurous and out of the "norm".But,Darling "Cockroaches?!!". Still they're part of the scene you're presently in so I guess they're "Par for the course". Well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Dear Bill, of all the six legged creatures in God's creation there is NOTHING so revolting as a COCKROACH! Ugh! Eeyeeew! Trust you to write poetry about such loathsome beasts. I was going to respond to the last piece you presented about Jeff Bezos and a cockroach, but my gorge rose and I decided to express my feelings with this piece. You have a talent for making the unattractive seem interesting, and worth writing about, as your efforts with Walruses and other species of creatures
has shown, My efforts are mainly of the "flowers and pussycats" genre so I admire your choice of subject as adventurous and out of the "norm".But,Darling "Cockroaches?!!". Still they're part of the scene you're presently in so I guess they're "Par for the course". Well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much, Cass, for the spiffy review, complete with a six. I'll try to get through the bug file fast and find a kitty cat to write about. Bill
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very interesting and so humorous! The cockroaches are so amusing and funny. I love the way you describe cockroaches and their ways. Your verses are so musical and in tune with that awesome photo. WELL DONE! liberty justice
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Very interesting and so humorous! The cockroaches are so amusing and funny. I love the way you describe cockroaches and their ways. Your verses are so musical and in tune with that awesome photo. WELL DONE! liberty justice
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Liberty, for the super review. Bill