Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Such a pleasant, tangible expression of love, making time to spend time together and privately together. Perfect syllable count. Congratulations on the win!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for your comments and good review. It?s appreciated.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Cheers Contestant;
-I've been here for a long period of time And I never heard of a 5/7/5 that is allowed to be rhyming. If it's it's allowed Then that is great I wish you all the luck in the contest and take care and have a good one because yours is quite creative and ingeniously inventive.
Alex

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

Thanks. I read the prompt and it didn?t say Haiku so I went with it. I appreciate your comments.

reply by krys123 on 11-Feb-2018

Oh, that was all right As it can be either one of the other. I was just recognizing the fact that I recognized the fact that you wrote a haiku.
Alex

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Fun bit of rhyme incorporated into the simple three line poem. Fits the them of a love poem, offers a sense of a story and a sense of two characters renewing their romantic relationship.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for the good review and comments. I appreciate your thoughts and encouragement.

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Short sweet and to the point...but that view! well who wouldn't want to be romancing there! You summed it all up in this wonderful little 5/7/5 piece..good luck in the contest :-) Nice job on this.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you for the great review and comments. I wish I knew where it?s located. I might have to take a trip.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

The vivid photograph you selected helped to establish the mood. You successfully captured the sense of romance in this tiny form. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 love poem competition- Joan

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot. I would love to know where this tropical location is so I can daydream about going there.

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot. I would love to know where this tropical location is so I can daydream about going there.

reply by Joan E. on 09-Feb-2018

I thought it was Hawaii... Sweet dreams about the tropics- Joan

Comment from jppoet

Excellent

What a beautiful poem of love and romance, (my favorite kind, not those
gory death and hoary stories weaved by even some famous FS poets.)
Your poetic artistry is in sweet affinity with the loveable photo which
lends mood and imagery to your lovely poem. john

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you John for the affirmation and lovely comments. I often wonder why so much darkness is written here on FS. I like to write about the good things of life. Regards!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 love poem. A romantic dinner for two lovers channel romantic thoughts that we can renew our lve in this time of solitude just two lovers.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you for your comments and good review!!

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you for your comments and good review!!

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

What a lovely setting. It does look romantic and inviting. There's a table set for two, so it's time to be together and enjoy the private time. Always a good idea to have a getaway like this occasionally. Your syllable count is perfect for the prompt. Best of luck. judi

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for the lovely review, Judi. I would really like to know this location in the tropics. It would be fun to go there.

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for the lovely review, Judi. I would really like to know this location in the tropics. It would be fun to go there.

reply by judiverse on 09-Feb-2018

You're welcome. It does look lovely. judi

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

I liked this 5-7-5 poem a lot. What is unusual for its form is that you make it rhyme. It's very romantic. Nothing like dinner for two at a beautiful setting. A lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for the good review and comments. I would love to know this location, wouldn?t you? It looks tropical.

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for the good review and comments. I would love to know this location, wouldn?t you? It looks tropical.

reply by Ulla on 09-Feb-2018

It looks wonderful. Yes I would like to know where it is and yes, I do think it's located somewhere in the tropics.

Comment from rhonnie69

Excellent

Hello SUGARRAY77: Your poem here is heart warming. It reminds me of husband and wife to be; or husband and wife already. Two happy people because of love for each other. There is just two kinds of people in our world. Those two people being, man and woman. Both of them were created by our God; to live happily together for ever and ever. "Therefore :
a man shall leave his father and mother, (man and woman) and be joined to his wife, and they (man and woman) shall become one flesh." See: GENESIS 2 : 24 : in your Holy Bible.
Thank you for sharing with us, (man and woman) SUGARRAY77. Your friend: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you Rhonnie. I fully agree that God blesses the union of man and woman ?only?. May our Lord and his word be glorified! Thanks so much for your great review.

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you Rhonnie. I fully agree that God blesses the union of man and woman ?only?. May our Lord and his word be glorified! Thanks so much for your great review.