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Tinder Love

Love 5-7-5

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Tinder Love, has those exact syllables and seems to endorse the concept of an online pairing through the YAY or NAY method of choosing a date. Nice.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
    Thanks for reading -is there anything that can't be done on line these days !! zanya
Comment from Fabiha_N
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This is a really great haiku! For some reason, I started laughing at this because my friend at school has the nickname "Tinderella", and it's based off of the dating app Tinder. This shows that you can find love anywhere!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
    Yes how times have changed !! thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Cute image.
-Syllable count is good.
-An interesting take on love.
-Good imagery and use of alliteration.
-The concluding line is effective and
gets your point across.
-Good luck in the contest, Zanya.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
    Thanks for reading zanya
reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Feb-2018
    You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
The new world of love, no more hugs and kisses
just swipe and tweet
Excellent use of alliteration and rhyme
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
    Yes brave new world of love !!!thanks for reading zanya