The Life of Mrs. Armstrong
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Comment from lyenochka
Wow! That is so incredibly generous of you to be that shelter for this girl. It could be really good or it could turn out to be a huge burden but you were willing to take to risk to protect her. So many girls have suffered because of perverse male relatives. Sigh.
'a teacher pet'. (teacher's)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Wow! That is so incredibly generous of you to be that shelter for this girl. It could be really good or it could turn out to be a huge burden but you were willing to take to risk to protect her. So many girls have suffered because of perverse male relatives. Sigh.
'a teacher pet'. (teacher's)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing and your amazing comments, Helene, I will fix that in a moment. Hugs n smiles!
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Aryr. I'm coming into your story without having read any previous chapters, but from what I can see it's clearly written and well composed. It moves along in a logical way which holds the reader's interest. Fourth paragraph up from the bottom--Andreas = Andrea's. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hi Aryr. I'm coming into your story without having read any previous chapters, but from what I can see it's clearly written and well composed. It moves along in a logical way which holds the reader's interest. Fourth paragraph up from the bottom--Andreas = Andrea's. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much Marilyn for reading and reviewing. And thank you for your kind comments, I will make that correction when I am finished here. It is so nice to see you back. It all takes time so don't push it. Hugs. Alie.
Comment from apky
I'm afraid I missed some preceeding chapters, so I can only guess at what sort of trouble Andrea is in with her uncle - that is, nothing good.
I enjoyed it and found it very entertaining. Slowly, I'm getting the hang of the characters in the story. No spags that I could detect. The plot continued to race and is sprinkled with a variety of intriguing situations.
Suggestions below:
that's friends not students(,) Andrea.
Since, we all know that he will not be in your apartment (delete-for) forever or at least we hope so;
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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I'm afraid I missed some preceeding chapters, so I can only guess at what sort of trouble Andrea is in with her uncle - that is, nothing good.
I enjoyed it and found it very entertaining. Slowly, I'm getting the hang of the characters in the story. No spags that I could detect. The plot continued to race and is sprinkled with a variety of intriguing situations.
Suggestions below:
that's friends not students(,) Andrea.
Since, we all know that he will not be in your apartment (delete-for) forever or at least we hope so;
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing and your very kind comments. I will take care of the two mistakes once I get out of this page.
Comment from Pantygynt
My old headmaster would have said you should not get so closely involved with your students. He said that to me when I thought about fostering a child in my class. And he was right. Mind you this is a 22 year old student not a ten year old, so perhaps the same rules don't apply. And of course you won't be there long will you, once the regular teacher returns.
See how caught up in this i am getting?
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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My old headmaster would have said you should not get so closely involved with your students. He said that to me when I thought about fostering a child in my class. And he was right. Mind you this is a 22 year old student not a ten year old, so perhaps the same rules don't apply. And of course you won't be there long will you, once the regular teacher returns.
See how caught up in this i am getting?
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Wow I am impressed, You are right in that she was 22 years old, she wouldn't stay forever and nope the regular teacher should return. Thanks for reviewing.
