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Senryu Yourself

44 total reviews 
Comment from Pantygynt
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I am not surprised to see this one with the first prize rosette atteached. Well done indeed. The desire to spend it all too quickly is a problem for many. But there are some thing you just can't keep on deposit.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thanks again for your excellent review and humor. There are things that you can't let build up no matter how hard you try. Thanks again...Bill
Comment from crzypnter
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Bill
This is a very clever and funny write. I'm sure many men here will relate. Lol
Easy to see why this is the winner. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thanks again, August, for your great review. I appreciate it. Personally, I'm too old to relate to it (ha). Take care, my friend...Bill
Comment from Ogden
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That's unfortunate. If you want my advice, keep the money and get rid of the wife. ;-)

Nice senyru, with an appropriate satori.

Good luck in the contest.

Don (aka Ogden)


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Don, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Thanks, it won the contest. Take care...Bill
reply by Ogden on 21-Feb-2018
    You're welcome, Bill. Good news!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Oh no! I'm sure some can relate to this. Have you shown this to your wife? It's always good when you can laugh at yourself. You did a great job with this and I can see why you were a winner

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thanks again for your excellent review and kind comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day my friend...Bill
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Cedar,
Your poem is a hoot! Now I can't offer my opinion about the second half of your poem, but I do know that money doesn't last long. My mother always said that if I have a dime, I spend a quarter! Hmmm...
Love your entry. Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Diane, for your humorous review. I'm glad you thought it was a hoot. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from Ben Colder
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U 2 . I thought I was the only one who heard that line. LOL. Much like money sometimes it is wise to diversify. Money wise that is. LOL. I see no mistakes in the write.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Ben, for your funny review. I appreciate it. Have a nice day...Bill
Comment from LIJ Red
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Farmer: Oh, we breed our champion bull every other day.
Visiting wife: See, hubby? Every other day is not unusual for a champion.
Farmer: Of course we have a different cow every other day.
Excellent and to prompt.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thanks for your funny review Red, that's my kind of joke. I've lived on a farm for 73 years. Take care...Bill
Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, clever and humorous, an unbeatable combination - more true than not, a typical human experience, reminding us most endearingly of our vulnerability as participant and critic...

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill
reply by evesayshi on 21-Feb-2018
    You are very welcome indeed, Bill...Eve
Comment from jdrhye
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Funny....the font is difficult to read but the photo with it is great! Enjoyed the short read keep me coming! Pretty much self explanatory not much left to say except what did she buy?

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
    Thanks for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great evening...Bill
Comment from Ashlie Daza
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It is quite fun to read. It's very funny. Gave me a good laugh. With only a few words and syllables, your poem did just that. Well deserved win. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Ashlie, for your excellent review. I'm glad it made you laugh. Take care my friend...Bill
reply by Ashlie Daza on 20-Feb-2018
    You are most welcome Bill. Take care
    As well.