Slow Down
Senryu Yourself44 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu about yourself, Slow Down, uses seventeen syllables to put yourself on report as being a "I Got Mine" guy. Being a generous lover pays dividends that transcend the moment (tee hee -- moment).
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This senryu about yourself, Slow Down, uses seventeen syllables to put yourself on report as being a "I Got Mine" guy. Being a generous lover pays dividends that transcend the moment (tee hee -- moment).
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Bill, for your great and funny review, I really appreciate it. Have a wonderful weekend...
Comment from l.raven
HI You,...I am so sorry I am out of sixes...but I love your poem my sweet friend...******... I will be standing at the gate when the booth opens...LOL...I ran out early this week...I think there is a pill for this problem...LOL...very well thought of you...and wish you would write more of these...and contest them...you make me laugh...well written....love to ya...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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HI You,...I am so sorry I am out of sixes...but I love your poem my sweet friend...******... I will be standing at the gate when the booth opens...LOL...I ran out early this week...I think there is a pill for this problem...LOL...very well thought of you...and wish you would write more of these...and contest them...you make me laugh...well written....love to ya...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you girl, for this wonderful review and for your support, you know I really appreciate it. I'm glad it made you laugh, although my wife doesn't think it's very funny (ha).
It's been such a cold winter around here I think my brain has frozen-up. It's hard to get in the mood to do anything, well, not everything (ha).
Take care of yourself and keep writing. You've been turning out some great stuff...Take care of yourself and Mom...Bill
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Boy so people have no sense of humor...LOL...
see there is hope...you are always so welcome my sweet friend...I have been in Florida most of this year...but they say it has been a bad year...snowing again today...you take of yourself too...and your wife...LOL...with mom it is one day at a time...God Bless...and last I saw...it was your win...love xxoo
Comment from Ella Gott
This was super funny. I laughed pretty hard myself, the only bit of feedback I have is that there seems to be an extra space between "with" and "money".
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This was super funny. I laughed pretty hard myself, the only bit of feedback I have is that there seems to be an extra space between "with" and "money".
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Ella, for your great review. I'm glad it made you laugh. And, thanks for your suggestion, I will check it out. Also, welcome to Fanstory...
Comment from Debbie Pope
Oh, so sad. A perfect Senryu Yourself. So creative. And I love the photo. Certainly fits your description. Good luck in the competition. You may have a winner here.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Oh, so sad. A perfect Senryu Yourself. So creative. And I love the photo. Certainly fits your description. Good luck in the competition. You may have a winner here.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Debbie, for your wonderful review, I really appreciate it. Have a great day my friend...
