Love Never Dies
3-5-3 poem7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I agree with you. Love doesn't die altogether. No matter the outcome, meaningful persons in our life have filled a purpose. Very nicely composed. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
I agree with you. Love doesn't die altogether. No matter the outcome, meaningful persons in our life have filled a purpose. Very nicely composed. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your kind consideration.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Love Never Dies, uses those eleven syllables to recall with sight, smell, and hearing, the one who is gone, but not forgotten. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This 3-5-3, Love Never Dies, uses those eleven syllables to recall with sight, smell, and hearing, the one who is gone, but not forgotten. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Your insights are much appreciated.
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
You've presented a mood of love and longing, and the graphics are perfect for your verse. A little punctuation would not be amiss, but that is cranky! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
You've presented a mood of love and longing, and the graphics are perfect for your verse. A little punctuation would not be amiss, but that is cranky! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Appreciate your dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I am about to lose my mother, any day now. When it happens, I will remember your words. They are lovely and comforting. Thank you. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
I am about to lose my mother, any day now. When it happens, I will remember your words. They are lovely and comforting. Thank you. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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So glad this poem will give you some comfort. I actually was thinking of my mom when I wrote it . Lost her three years ago. Sweet memories keep her alive in my heart .
Comment from angel123
The essence of your poem is beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with sentiments of love and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes!
Angel123
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
The essence of your poem is beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with sentiments of love and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes!
Angel123
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your insights!
Comment from zanya
A tribute to a special person - a beloved here in this 3-5-3 Air Poem - within the confines of the format a sense of her presence lingering is effectively conveyed
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
A tribute to a special person - a beloved here in this 3-5-3 Air Poem - within the confines of the format a sense of her presence lingering is effectively conveyed
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this entry for the contest, someone you love leaving their essence in the air so that their love remains, perfect words, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
I love this entry for the contest, someone you love leaving their essence in the air so that their love remains, perfect words, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thank you!