Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "A String"Dawn of Chaos
4 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
So many spectacular uses for something so simple. I think my favorite was the reference to "emerge forth birth". Unlimited what that new life can do in the thread of a life span. Keep pouring it out.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
So many spectacular uses for something so simple. I think my favorite was the reference to "emerge forth birth". Unlimited what that new life can do in the thread of a life span. Keep pouring it out.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Glad a few aspects of this write was found pleasing to you. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Writeling
This asks to be read again... and then it delivers even more. I really like:
'stripping their
had hope of no sin.'
You are a poet....
with best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
This asks to be read again... and then it delivers even more. I really like:
'stripping their
had hope of no sin.'
You are a poet....
with best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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I've been called many, adding your statement as a positive. Glad this write was found pleasing. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello TPAC
I see that a string do many good things,but why bring up the horrible thing it can do?
rip deep into an exposed throat,
as victim to choke slayer take a sip.
To me just tell the good things string can accomplish
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
Hello TPAC
I see that a string do many good things,but why bring up the horrible thing it can do?
rip deep into an exposed throat,
as victim to choke slayer take a sip.
To me just tell the good things string can accomplish
Gert
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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A little harsh, kept you woke, no personal intent but certainly an existing reality. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Sherman541
The string picture reminds me of a harness board, for pin ball machines. So many many things strings can be and do. From sewing, tying and hanging too Sherman541
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
The string picture reminds me of a harness board, for pin ball machines. So many many things strings can be and do. From sewing, tying and hanging too Sherman541
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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The string definitely has many applied aspects for its usage. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
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you are welcome