Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "A String"Dawn of Chaos
8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
More than a well-spun listing of the humble 'string', your words bring the mind to places it may not have ventured otherwise... Thanx for sharing this evening! ;)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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More than a well-spun listing of the humble 'string', your words bring the mind to places it may not have ventured otherwise... Thanx for sharing this evening! ;)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Glad certain aspects prevailing this write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for those words and generous rate.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
I must say this is a very deep poem. I never gave thought to all the things strings can do, good or bad. The picture compliments the poem quite nicely.
Great job.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I must say this is a very deep poem. I never gave thought to all the things strings can do, good or bad. The picture compliments the poem quite nicely.
Great job.
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Super. Glad certain aspects are appealing to your interests. Thanking for that generous rate.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love the thoughts and the creativity behind the powers and uses of strings. You showed mastery of creative work. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, dear TPAC. Well delivered.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I love the thoughts and the creativity behind the powers and uses of strings. You showed mastery of creative work. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, dear TPAC. Well delivered.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Wow. I appreciate your statements. Your thoughts really touched deep: within me. Thanking you for your generous rate and encouraging words.
Comment from Julie G1
Well written. This writer has conveyed a meaningful word picture to the reader, full of evocative language and suitable imagery. Overall, worked well for this reader.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Well written. This writer has conveyed a meaningful word picture to the reader, full of evocative language and suitable imagery. Overall, worked well for this reader.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I have my issues, finding grammar my major challenge. Yeah, people seem to like the attempted thoughts: I try to convey in these writes.
Comment from Jean Lutz
So many spectacular uses for something so simple. I think my favorite was the reference to "emerge forth birth". Unlimited what that new life can do in the thread of a life span. Keep pouring it out.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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So many spectacular uses for something so simple. I think my favorite was the reference to "emerge forth birth". Unlimited what that new life can do in the thread of a life span. Keep pouring it out.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Glad a few aspects of this write was found pleasing to you. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Writeling
This asks to be read again... and then it delivers even more. I really like:
'stripping their
had hope of no sin.'
You are a poet....
with best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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This asks to be read again... and then it delivers even more. I really like:
'stripping their
had hope of no sin.'
You are a poet....
with best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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I've been called many, adding your statement as a positive. Glad this write was found pleasing. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello TPAC
I see that a string do many good things,but why bring up the horrible thing it can do?
rip deep into an exposed throat,
as victim to choke slayer take a sip.
To me just tell the good things string can accomplish
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Hello TPAC
I see that a string do many good things,but why bring up the horrible thing it can do?
rip deep into an exposed throat,
as victim to choke slayer take a sip.
To me just tell the good things string can accomplish
Gert
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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A little harsh, kept you woke, no personal intent but certainly an existing reality. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Sherman541
The string picture reminds me of a harness board, for pin ball machines. So many many things strings can be and do. From sewing, tying and hanging too Sherman541
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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The string picture reminds me of a harness board, for pin ball machines. So many many things strings can be and do. From sewing, tying and hanging too Sherman541
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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The string definitely has many applied aspects for its usage. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
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you are welcome