Night Time Light Show
Nonet contest16 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is an interesting picture. I have never seen so many lightning bugs in one place.
It would be cool to see them all among the leaves, so they look like lanterns.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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This is an interesting picture. I have never seen so many lightning bugs in one place.
It would be cool to see them all among the leaves, so they look like lanterns.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your review-It was great coming 3rd.
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You're very welcome.
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Comment from nancyjam
This is a lovely Nonet using beautiful
imagery to describe a night full of
fireflies.
Syllable count is right on and the presentation
is beautiful.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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This is a lovely Nonet using beautiful
imagery to describe a night full of
fireflies.
Syllable count is right on and the presentation
is beautiful.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet poem about the fireflies putting up a light show at night to captivate the audience with their magic glow. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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A very well-written Nonet poem about the fireflies putting up a light show at night to captivate the audience with their magic glow. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from William Ross
Nice job on the nonet about the fire fly's, One night I must have see a swormof thousands and thousands, lit up the whole back yard, good luck and have a good day.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Nice job on the nonet about the fire fly's, One night I must have see a swormof thousands and thousands, lit up the whole back yard, good luck and have a good day.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great overall presentation--love the color scheme, the word choices, the picture, & your well chosen words. The shape of the nonet is amazing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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This is a great overall presentation--love the color scheme, the word choices, the picture, & your well chosen words. The shape of the nonet is amazing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from mvbrooks
While each successive line has one less syllable, it's very challenging to get the lines to "line up" in size as you've done making your poem more exceptional/unusual than the standard nonet. The topic is relatable and positive and the imagines seems to bring the "night lights" to life.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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While each successive line has one less syllable, it's very challenging to get the lines to "line up" in size as you've done making your poem more exceptional/unusual than the standard nonet. The topic is relatable and positive and the imagines seems to bring the "night lights" to life.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
A traditional nine lines cum 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable structure compliant Nonet Poetry Contest Entry that reminisces the glow of fireflies in the forest.
The work highlights the glowing embroidery of light emitted by the fireflies and how it bears a captivating effect on the protagonist.
The work earns its texture through the use of imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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A traditional nine lines cum 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable structure compliant Nonet Poetry Contest Entry that reminisces the glow of fireflies in the forest.
The work highlights the glowing embroidery of light emitted by the fireflies and how it bears a captivating effect on the protagonist.
The work earns its texture through the use of imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from apky
Beautiful artwork, a delight for the eyes.
You have crafted great nonet, in such a delicate story, which you tell with amazing, beautiful words, although I'll admit I only read precious few poems.
I wish I still had a six to give.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Beautiful artwork, a delight for the eyes.
You have crafted great nonet, in such a delicate story, which you tell with amazing, beautiful words, although I'll admit I only read precious few poems.
I wish I still had a six to give.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from donette1914
very nice and I can picture the fire lights with a light show of nature is the best show on earth. i enjoyed this piece. well written thank you for sharing
review on march 16th 2018 by donette1914
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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very nice and I can picture the fire lights with a light show of nature is the best show on earth. i enjoyed this piece. well written thank you for sharing
review on march 16th 2018 by donette1914
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Nonet Poetry writing prompt.
Well told,your fireflies are easy to see.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Nonet Poetry writing prompt.
Well told,your fireflies are easy to see.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thank you