Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

My thumbs up just launched you from 3rd place into 2nd place by yourself. Your poem is beautiful and sorrowful. Such a realistic photo of love lost. I love your poem with alliteration and the disappearing of a lover. NICE. liberty justice

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your read and your encouraging words. Much appreciated.

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, Soulful writing. Of note:

Come suddenly
in my deepest moments of loneliness.

(The face you can't forget.)

Fantastic, contemplative, complementary photo choice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for the read and the kind words.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a cute entry for the 'Tetractys Poem' writing prompt.
Well told with a clear message in your few well chosen words.
Good luck to you with this in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018

Thank you for the read and the review.