Holiday and Holyday Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Lent"religious and holiday poetry
4 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Mystery Poet. I like your selection and theme, but did want to point out that the prompt says all three lines need to rhyme. You have the right format, just need the rhyming. Good luck.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Hi Mystery Poet. I like your selection and theme, but did want to point out that the prompt says all three lines need to rhyme. You have the right format, just need the rhyming. Good luck.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Hello, Thank you for telling me about the three lines rhyming. I went in and edited.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
This is a rhyme deficient 1-6-1poetry contest entry. The work is built on a very apt subject matter and structurally falls in tandem with specifications. But without an appropriate rhyming of all the three lines; the work is faulty and needs reworking.
Satisfactory work! But more grease to your elbows.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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This is a rhyme deficient 1-6-1poetry contest entry. The work is built on a very apt subject matter and structurally falls in tandem with specifications. But without an appropriate rhyming of all the three lines; the work is faulty and needs reworking.
Satisfactory work! But more grease to your elbows.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Dear Lloyd, Thank you for pointing out the error. I went in and edited.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'd have no trouble with the not eating meat, but not eating at all would be a struggle. Do you think the word think should be 'eat'. He he he, just a thought, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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I'd have no trouble with the not eating meat, but not eating at all would be a struggle. Do you think the word think should be 'eat'. He he he, just a thought, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Very good, and the rating is based on the qualities of the poem alone.
However, were you aware this has been entered for a rhyming 1-6-1 contest? The three lines will be required to share a rhyme.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Very good, and the rating is based on the qualities of the poem alone.
However, were you aware this has been entered for a rhyming 1-6-1 contest? The three lines will be required to share a rhyme.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Dear James, Thank you for your review and for pointing out the error. I went in and edited.
