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Clever doggie

Teaching an old dog a new trick

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Comment from jppoet
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An adorable poem, despite its restrictive 161 format, the photo adds charm and affinity to your text. You might enjoy my entry VALENTINE'S DAY in the VALENTINE POETRY acrostic contest where I went wild with a TRIPLE acrostic which friends say has never been
equalled on Fanstory. I am becoming your Fan. Blessings, john

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    I have reviewed your Valentine poem. WOW. Thanks for the great comments. Love Jen.
Comment from persevere
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I am drawn to this 1-6-1 as we have a not so young dog who is still learning new tricks. The poem has the short , well defined words which are necessary for training. The photograph is a perfect accompaniment to this contest entry.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Many thanks for your kind comments
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in so few words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A clever poem and dogs so love to play this way, I wish you luck with the contest, this write is lively and full of fun, good luck Jen, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thank you my friend. X
Comment from patcelaw
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Jenin this is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest. Many blessings for the remainder of this week. Patricia

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thank you
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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This 1-6-1 contest entry is very well done and the rhyming is spot on. The picture you chose is excellent to go with the entry.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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    Many thanks
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your short-formed poem. I wish you luck in the contest. I love the photo of the dog - my dogs really don't fetch. They will bring you the toy, ask you to throw it, and then play 'keep away,' for quite some time,

~patty~

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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    Many thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks an adage in a word of practical teaching an old dog a new trick, well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Many thanks