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Come to the Table

Faith-based freestyle poem.

42 total reviews 
Comment from LIJ Red
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If you don't view the world through the rose-colored glasses of unquestioning faith, it is a dreary spectacle indeed. Well said, and to prompt. Excellent.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much for your encouragement and insights. :)
Comment from Cycler
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Faith, Grace, and Love - the basis of our God filled life. Your poem described them well. I agree with you about Faith being the solid ground; without it, we don't experience the full scent of grace and love.
Very good, spiritual thoughts and poem.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you so very much, Cycler, for your gracious review. I appreciate you taking time to read and review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Powerful words and beautiful images, especially that faith is the ground beneath murky waters. I have absolutely nothing to criticize about the poem. I don't think that your visual helps the poem though. It is pretty, and I like the gold. It is just pretty artwork.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thanks very much, Debbie, for your insights and encouragements. I appreciate you taking time to read and review.
Comment from mermaids
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"Love is stronger than your struggles' is a great last line that ahs an impact on the reader. Your poem teaches the reader and makes her think. "Faith is the solid ground beneath murky waters" is another line that impacts your poem.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much, mermaids, for your generous and supportive review. I appreciate the time you took to read and review the poem.
Comment from Boogienights
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Thank you for a beautifully written poem that expresses such a positive message. All it takes is a little faith to see you through the hard times in life. I like the image you paired with it,Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much, Boogienights, for your very generous and supportive review. I appreciate your insights and encouragement.
Comment from writerjen
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Nicely written faith based free style poem. Nice imagery in this poem. I like the last line, And makes straight the crooked road. Love is stronger than your struggles." Glad you can write about your faith and help others find same help and hope you have. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Hi, writerjen. Thank you for taking time out to read and review my poem. I appreciate your insights very much!
Comment from Tacticz
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I enjoyed this poem a great deal. We all cope with life in different ways and your words ring true with that fact. I love how you describe Faith in your own way and capture the reader with the emotion behind it.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your very kind and generous review. I appreciate your insights. :)
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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I loved this it was absolutely beautiful right down to the colours. I really hope it does well in the competition it is an outstanding poem kindest regards and best wishes Meia xx

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much, Meia. I really appreciate your good wishes and your most kind review. :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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Thank you for sharing this Awesome message of Grace and Faith. It's always refreshing to read these type of poems that also offer hope and mercy. Thank you for sharing this. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Jeff, thank you very much for this very kind and generous review. I appreciate it! :)
Comment from Paws4FX
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Faith, hope and love. Three of my favorite things! Even for those with little faith, you have to love the line, "Grace does not care what face you wear." Reminds us that grace cannot be earned, it's already been given . . . that's where the Faith comes in. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you!

Michael

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your kind review. :)