A Life Of Silent Cries
The children suffer most.86 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Easy, This is a very well written poem you have penned about the tragedy that happens to a lot of very small children in different places in the world. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with your words! Blessings, Teri
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Easy, This is a very well written poem you have penned about the tragedy that happens to a lot of very small children in different places in the world. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with your words! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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I thank you so much Teri. I am honored friend. tom
Comment from zanya
A poem portraying in stark relief the reality of war and all its horror especially for the most vulnerable'mud-caked cloth surrounds his loins' - powerful concrete imagery
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A poem portraying in stark relief the reality of war and all its horror especially for the most vulnerable'mud-caked cloth surrounds his loins' - powerful concrete imagery
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much zanya. tom
Comment from jenintorre
A very sad and poignant poem and oh so very true. It is unthinkable but we see it each day on T.V. You have captured the hopelessness of this poor child in your writing.
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A very sad and poignant poem and oh so very true. It is unthinkable but we see it each day on T.V. You have captured the hopelessness of this poor child in your writing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you jenintorre. tom
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces the portrait of a dying child divested of his family members in a war torn country.
The work highlights the hopelessness of the dying child and death as the only means of reuniting with his family.
The work highlights it's texture through the use of simile, metaphor, imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
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The work reminisces the portrait of a dying child divested of his family members in a war torn country.
The work highlights the hopelessness of the dying child and death as the only means of reuniting with his family.
The work highlights it's texture through the use of simile, metaphor, imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much Lloyd. Most honored. tom
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very sad poem and you paint such a grim picture here of a poor child thirsty, hungry and struggling for life, excellent descriptions and a very well penned sad write, love Dolly x
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This is a very sad poem and you paint such a grim picture here of a poor child thirsty, hungry and struggling for life, excellent descriptions and a very well penned sad write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you Dolly. tom
Comment from Sherman541
Very, very sad and heartfelt poem. I cannot imagine how people can just walk away, as if the children do not exist. On the other hand, I cannot imagine how one could save so many. I do wish that there was an answer for all the starving young and old alike. My prayers continue in hopes of one day finding some kind or solution. Sad, but very beautifully written. Sherman541
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Very, very sad and heartfelt poem. I cannot imagine how people can just walk away, as if the children do not exist. On the other hand, I cannot imagine how one could save so many. I do wish that there was an answer for all the starving young and old alike. My prayers continue in hopes of one day finding some kind or solution. Sad, but very beautifully written. Sherman541
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you Sherman. tom
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you are welcome
