A Life Of Silent Cries
The children suffer most.86 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
Indeed 3 rd world starvation should not be so difficult to ovarcome but "developed" countries wont give what they could.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
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Indeed 3 rd world starvation should not be so difficult to ovarcome but "developed" countries wont give what they could.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from BethShelby
This is a picture that represents the horrors of war. It is a picture no one wants to acknowledge and a innocent child could be placed in a situation so horrific. Death is a welcome release.
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This is a picture that represents the horrors of war. It is a picture no one wants to acknowledge and a innocent child could be placed in a situation so horrific. Death is a welcome release.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Janet Foor
This heartbreaking story is sad by itself but knowing it is true for many children, makes it heart wrenching.
Your masterful story telling is powerful.
Blessings
Janet
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This heartbreaking story is sad by itself but knowing it is true for many children, makes it heart wrenching.
Your masterful story telling is powerful.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have touched me pretty hard with this one, Everett. It reminds me of the poems that I wrote about the war in Ukraine. I think this is one of your best efforts.
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You have touched me pretty hard with this one, Everett. It reminds me of the poems that I wrote about the war in Ukraine. I think this is one of your best efforts.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from BermyBye50
easyeverett1
This is another perfect example of you mastery of the rhyming poetic form. I believe there is no poetic form that you cannot master. You are a brilliant poet whose posts serve as exceptional works in a masterclass course of teaching and writing poetry forms.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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easyeverett1
This is another perfect example of you mastery of the rhyming poetic form. I believe there is no poetic form that you cannot master. You are a brilliant poet whose posts serve as exceptional works in a masterclass course of teaching and writing poetry forms.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I am honored Eugene. Thanks friend. easy
Comment from Lady MJ
Well written. Thought-provoking. The first two stanzas can lead you to think of someone whose home life is not of the best. Sad to say that in today's time, many kids are identifiable in this poem.
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Well written. Thought-provoking. The first two stanzas can lead you to think of someone whose home life is not of the best. Sad to say that in today's time, many kids are identifiable in this poem.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem sure serves to remind us to count our blessings if we live somewhere that we get three meals a day and then some. Strongest lines: Each shallow gasp the child can take
Produces rattled rales of death;
I guess if I had read this just before our latest neighborhood food drive, I might have doubled a donation.
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This poem sure serves to remind us to count our blessings if we live somewhere that we get three meals a day and then some. Strongest lines: Each shallow gasp the child can take
Produces rattled rales of death;
I guess if I had read this just before our latest neighborhood food drive, I might have doubled a donation.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a very powerful and moving dark poem about a homeless child dying on the streets as passer byes walk on ignoring his cries for help as he takes his last breath.
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a very powerful and moving dark poem about a homeless child dying on the streets as passer byes walk on ignoring his cries for help as he takes his last breath.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from forestport12
Such a vivid depiction you've put in the readers mind's eye. Sad, gut wrenching, but an important poem of a reality in places far removed from our mind's eye as I sit on a couch and watch fantasies play out on a television screen. Compassion versus complacency. Blessings around the bend.
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Such a vivid depiction you've put in the readers mind's eye. Sad, gut wrenching, but an important poem of a reality in places far removed from our mind's eye as I sit on a couch and watch fantasies play out on a television screen. Compassion versus complacency. Blessings around the bend.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from JT traveller
Absolutely astounding. You write so eloquently I feel your words etch into my very soul. So profound, so poignant so true and posed so poetically. I have much to learn. Thank you for sharing your talent. J
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Absolutely astounding. You write so eloquently I feel your words etch into my very soul. So profound, so poignant so true and posed so poetically. I have much to learn. Thank you for sharing your talent. J
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
