Holiday and Holyday Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Valentine Heart"religious and holiday poetry
5 total reviews
Comment from GLOBALEYES
The picture is very "eye" catching, taking you to the center, heart to heart, then heart inside heart inside heart, until finally revealing its complete form which includes the eye or oneness. Very colorful. I was trying to think up a better word for "calling", but I couldn't, to take it to a deeper level. Your words are very loving and hopeful. The ultimate, when two hearts beat as one. I also thought about it in a crass way, an insect seeing another and signaling its desire by displaying. Short, sweet, to the point. Great job. Betty Davis
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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The picture is very "eye" catching, taking you to the center, heart to heart, then heart inside heart inside heart, until finally revealing its complete form which includes the eye or oneness. Very colorful. I was trying to think up a better word for "calling", but I couldn't, to take it to a deeper level. Your words are very loving and hopeful. The ultimate, when two hearts beat as one. I also thought about it in a crass way, an insect seeing another and signaling its desire by displaying. Short, sweet, to the point. Great job. Betty Davis
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Dear Global Eyes, Thank you for your six stars and your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Valentine Day poem you have penned for the contest in the 5-7-5 format. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written Valentine Day poem you have penned for the contest in the 5-7-5 format. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Dove;
Thank you for sharing your Valentine five-seven-five. The syllable count is right, and it is certainly a fitting piece for the contest. Great artwork to complete the presentation. Good luck,
~patty~
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Hi, Dove;
Thank you for sharing your Valentine five-seven-five. The syllable count is right, and it is certainly a fitting piece for the contest. Great artwork to complete the presentation. Good luck,
~patty~
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Dear patty, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A romantic write and I wish you luck with the contest, glad you won your love back and I hope he stays with you this time, he he he, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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A romantic write and I wish you luck with the contest, glad you won your love back and I hope he stays with you this time, he he he, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Dear Dolly'sPoems, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 for Valentine's. It is always great when somone we love return to us after a misunderstanding and both realize they truly belong together.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 for Valentine's. It is always great when somone we love return to us after a misunderstanding and both realize they truly belong together.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
