Funny Honey
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "More Than Plenty Honeybees."A Witty Ditty Anthology
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightful--great closing punch--mom and dad did not agree but.....! Cleverly told in rhyme. Whimsical--a treat to read--I like the sick/quick rhyme. Cheers. LIz
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Delightful--great closing punch--mom and dad did not agree but.....! Cleverly told in rhyme. Whimsical--a treat to read--I like the sick/quick rhyme. Cheers. LIz
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
Comment from angel123
I love your poem and imagination. I don't know if it's a true story or not, but it's a good one and I enjoyed reading it. It flows and rhymes well and it held my attention. I like your artwork choice, but bees around a picnic basket would have been better. But sometimes it's hard to find the exact artwork you want. Best wishes and keep writing.
angel123
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I love your poem and imagination. I don't know if it's a true story or not, but it's a good one and I enjoyed reading it. It flows and rhymes well and it held my attention. I like your artwork choice, but bees around a picnic basket would have been better. But sometimes it's hard to find the exact artwork you want. Best wishes and keep writing.
angel123
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a what a mess contest entry prompt rich and seems all symmetry flood well read well with no grammar issues as well ejective an object accountants for firmly in place descriptive measures aligned perfectly thanks for just in Good Luck dr. Ricky 1024
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This is a what a mess contest entry prompt rich and seems all symmetry flood well read well with no grammar issues as well ejective an object accountants for firmly in place descriptive measures aligned perfectly thanks for just in Good Luck dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
Comment from Fabiha_N
LOL, this is funny! This poem is well-written, and I love the story. Having an incident like that would definitely be a mess. I would probably scream if that happened to me! Great job, this is a good entry for the contest!
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LOL, this is funny! This poem is well-written, and I love the story. Having an incident like that would definitely be a mess. I would probably scream if that happened to me! Great job, this is a good entry for the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018