Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I like "solely cellular." It's so much more lyrical than "single celled." And they certainly are the model for laloneness. Yet they come in masses. Good job.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks, Debbie

Comment from randman58

Excellent

A well written lune. Factual and humorous. Someone might say a metaphor for life in general. I don't know about that, I just think it's cool. Well done, good luck in contest..............Randy

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks, Randy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A poignant write and so true, I wish you luck with the contest, a great lune write or should I say a lone write! He he he, A joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting Lune poem you have penned about the amoeba. You used very good wording. I love the art work and colors you chose for this. I really like the color purple! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Okay - this lune poem confirms it - you are altogether too bright for me to keep up. (lol) This is so clever! Your presentation, too, is not only beautiful, it fits, almost resembling the little critters... (I wonder what my cold looks like... HAHAHAHA!)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks, Dawn, for the great review. Bill

reply by Dawn Munro on 01-Feb-2018

My pleasure. :))

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Lune Poetry' writing prompt.
Its cute. Any I like your zany pictures.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Speaking of strange things, I read this morning about someone claiming that a humanees was actually born, half human and half chimpanzee. That's weird.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

I recall when that experiment began, They posted an ad on the student board at MSU that they wanted men to mate with a chimp. $500. I showed up and agreed to all the requirements as long as I could pay the five hundred in installments. (Old joke)

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Hi, Bill. You are getting a lot of mileage out of those amoeba. You make it sound like they're up to some hanky panky in this one. Nice alliteration with solely cellular. Fun last line. Your lune format is correctly handled. Very colorful! Best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 30-Jan-2018

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from closetpoetjester

Exceptional

Ooooh what a very cleverly worded poem.
Being alone and in company all at once.
I like that idea haha
I wonder if they write LOL

A delightful short poem dedicated to DNA and the genetic makeup of man.
It all starts with a cell or two and then multiply, multiply, multiply baby!!! haha

Cheers P

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you, P, for the fun review. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Good lune structure and continuing with your Amoeba theme. I like the alliteration in "Solely cellular" and then the surprising oxymoron at the end of being alone and together at the same time.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you lyenochka, for the great review. Bill