Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu

Excellent

Hi there
A great poem created in a very difficult genre. It must have taken you quite some time to fulfill all the prerequisites. I think you deserve congratulations for this lovely creation.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Hello Gulbahar, thank you very much for the visit and the encouraging review; glad you like the write; take care.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Tyburn' poetry contest.
Well written and a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Hi Sharon, I am glad you stopped by and pleased that you like the poem, thank you very much my friend.