Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Pals"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
TPAC it's amazing the things in life that could bring two Souls together whether or not you have a soul, something brings two of whatever together and whatever it is that forms that common Bond, there's nothing that can break it. As you so descriptively displayed in your poem
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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TPAC it's amazing the things in life that could bring two Souls together whether or not you have a soul, something brings two of whatever together and whatever it is that forms that common Bond, there's nothing that can break it. As you so descriptively displayed in your poem
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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I'm happy my efforts to convey this feeling was obtained by the reader. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching words about this write.
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My pleasure
Comment from tmoler
The poem had the tone of a well written poem. It had an essence about it of a good poem. There were some misspelled words that if you corrected them would make a very decent poem.
A good art illustration.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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The poem had the tone of a well written poem. It had an essence about it of a good poem. There were some misspelled words that if you corrected them would make a very decent poem.
A good art illustration.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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I'm under constant revision of my writes. Statements such as your assist my efforts un their presentation. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching response about its read.
Comment from Artasylum
Hey TPAC... This has an intense message. Thanks for that and looking forward. yours, diana
Dreamers sleeping to hold to a memory,
truth accomplished a story told of them,
sight a viewed fold outside their current.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Hey TPAC... This has an intense message. Thanks for that and looking forward. yours, diana
Dreamers sleeping to hold to a memory,
truth accomplished a story told of them,
sight a viewed fold outside their current.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Glad that some features detailed in this write was pleasing to you. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting words about its message.
Comment from Raul1
Great poem! This two beings did get along well with each other. The poem is grammar error free. No mistakes at all. I like this friendship between the man and his dog.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Great poem! This two beings did get along well with each other. The poem is grammar error free. No mistakes at all. I like this friendship between the man and his dog.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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I hope my future write hold these given attributes you accredited to this one. Thanking you again for your generous rate and welcomed response.
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You're welcome
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello TPAC, you have an unusual poetic style. Very different and that's great. It's hard to be different. I noticed no errors and picked up on the two souls sharing time together. Both with different ideas and agendas. I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your poetry, Ana.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Hello TPAC, you have an unusual poetic style. Very different and that's great. It's hard to be different. I noticed no errors and picked up on the two souls sharing time together. Both with different ideas and agendas. I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your poetry, Ana.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Long time to achieve this level of coherency. Glad some aspects were found pleasing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from Gloria ....
I adore this poem, TPAC. Dreaming on a porch to view a farm sounds like a good place to be at least to my way of thinking.
Your words just ring off the page and there is lots of movement through the poem in addition to imagery.
A statement of two separate souls sharing time is love.
An excellent poem and a pleasure to read.
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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I adore this poem, TPAC. Dreaming on a porch to view a farm sounds like a good place to be at least to my way of thinking.
Your words just ring off the page and there is lots of movement through the poem in addition to imagery.
A statement of two separate souls sharing time is love.
An excellent poem and a pleasure to read.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Cities doesn't really allow this back in the woods porch comfort. Glad aspects found in this write was pleasing. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting words.
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, interesting, educational, artistic image to match, well presented, well balanced, easy to read, creative print, man and dog spending time together, good
choice, creative use of words.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Good read, interesting, educational, artistic image to match, well presented, well balanced, easy to read, creative print, man and dog spending time together, good
choice, creative use of words.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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After my many lacks perhaps at least I found the path to improving my writes. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
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You're welcome! i'm the same.
mine is lack of time, yes it takes time :)
Comment from Janet Foor
An interesting take on togetherness and pals. A kind of musing of friends and friendship on various topics on various occasions.
Strange ending. Not sure what to make of that.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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An interesting take on togetherness and pals. A kind of musing of friends and friendship on various topics on various occasions.
Strange ending. Not sure what to make of that.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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I'm fighting this last piece in the write, so revisions might be forth coming upon it. Thanking you dispute my pits for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
I am enjoying these pieces of yours. One man and his dog, emotionally recreated.
The style really works for me. As I have said before - the narrative tumbles in a direction, the reader has a drift of images which only take form (for me) on a second or third (or more) reading. I cannot claim to untangle it all but I will work at it.
When I read these I 'hear' a strong, slow, almost country dialect.
Great stuff.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Hello Anon
I am enjoying these pieces of yours. One man and his dog, emotionally recreated.
The style really works for me. As I have said before - the narrative tumbles in a direction, the reader has a drift of images which only take form (for me) on a second or third (or more) reading. I cannot claim to untangle it all but I will work at it.
When I read these I 'hear' a strong, slow, almost country dialect.
Great stuff.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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You got me, way back in the woods I was born. My fight with expression has become my blood. I get cut a lot doing battles. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a statement of two separate souls in togetherness, surprisingly, acted like pals as saved life; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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This speaks a statement of two separate souls in togetherness, surprisingly, acted like pals as saved life; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Again thanking you for your kind response about this write. A picture of a fading memory as progress that over nature natural aspects.
