Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Pals"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Anntonette
Great imagery here! This Is a relaxing read, that will comfort readers while reading it. The one thing I recommend Is toning down the bold, the size and the font of the words. Thank you!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Great imagery here! This Is a relaxing read, that will comfort readers while reading it. The one thing I recommend Is toning down the bold, the size and the font of the words. Thank you!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thanking you for your generous rate and touching remarks. I will tone down.
Comment from sherry3
I see this, obviously, as extremely creative and intelligent. It doesn't flow in my brain as easily as lighter fare, but I recognize it is exceptional talent. The play of words is clever, but puzzles me until I read it, and then read it again. Nevertheless, absorbing the story in the end solves the mystery and brings a smile. sherry
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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I see this, obviously, as extremely creative and intelligent. It doesn't flow in my brain as easily as lighter fare, but I recognize it is exceptional talent. The play of words is clever, but puzzles me until I read it, and then read it again. Nevertheless, absorbing the story in the end solves the mystery and brings a smile. sherry
Comment Written 01-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018
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Thank you for your honesty and generous rate. I suffer from grammar flaws pits I call them. Revisions of all my writes are constant.
Comment from WORDSOFTHEHEART
I enjoyed your memories being reflected in this writing. It reminded me of the bond I had with my dog and cats growing up. I grew up in the country and animals, nature, family and food was the fiber of our quilt. Several lines were so touching.
One of my favorite
"Elders that supplied waiting dinner table,
young then neither them now is capable,
able energy either by venture explore."
I look forward to more of your postings.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed your memories being reflected in this writing. It reminded me of the bond I had with my dog and cats growing up. I grew up in the country and animals, nature, family and food was the fiber of our quilt. Several lines were so touching.
One of my favorite
"Elders that supplied waiting dinner table,
young then neither them now is capable,
able energy either by venture explore."
I look forward to more of your postings.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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Most writes suffering grammar pits, revisions of my writes are constant. Glad aspects in this work were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching remarks.
Comment from SLMorrical
I really enjoyed reading this. I could picture the man and dog asleep on the porch. I can also see why it was recognized. This flows very well. There is nothing I can see that needs to be changed. Very well written, good work. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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I really enjoyed reading this. I could picture the man and dog asleep on the porch. I can also see why it was recognized. This flows very well. There is nothing I can see that needs to be changed. Very well written, good work. Keep writing.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018
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I hope your statement is half true suffering pits in my works. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
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Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing this interesting look and perspective on the change over time. Yes, at one time the domestic dog at our side was a feared foe.
We still have wolves and coyotes, but the domestic dog favors being with and protecting his human.
Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing this interesting look and perspective on the change over time. Yes, at one time the domestic dog at our side was a feared foe.
We still have wolves and coyotes, but the domestic dog favors being with and protecting his human.
Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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Thanking you for your generous rate and touching remarks pertained to this particular write.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello TPAC
I like what you are saying about two best friend
like with me an my cat when we are relaxing, with her by my side, that we each have our own dreams and times our own personal fantasies
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Hello TPAC
I like what you are saying about two best friend
like with me an my cat when we are relaxing, with her by my side, that we each have our own dreams and times our own personal fantasies
Gert
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Glad this write touched points of yours interests. My remembrance of farm life. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
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You are welcome TPAC
Gert
Comment from Rickie1
Wonderful sentiment. I'm easily relating. I visualize my old puppy sleeping next to me, I'm an old man, on the couch and the comfort we both feel being close to each other. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Wonderful sentiment. I'm easily relating. I visualize my old puppy sleeping next to me, I'm an old man, on the couch and the comfort we both feel being close to each other. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Animal friendship seems to be a.winner. Most my works suffering coherency. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response,
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - what a heartwarming and moving piece ... it truly brings to clear visual the two of them in fantasy and in reality...shared between them! :) :) Would that we all had such a companion! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Wow - what a heartwarming and moving piece ... it truly brings to clear visual the two of them in fantasy and in reality...shared between them! :) :) Would that we all had such a companion! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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This write took me back home and youth on the farm. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching remarks.
Comment from Possummagic
A lovely use of words. They roll off the tongue nicely and your work is structured well. I particularly enjoyed your final verse. It sounds like my husband and our dog. PM
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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A lovely use of words. They roll off the tongue nicely and your work is structured well. I particularly enjoyed your final verse. It sounds like my husband and our dog. PM
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Glad aspects of this write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
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You are very welcome. PM
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The strangest sounds comfort us and leave us in peace, the familiar sounds that we associate with good things like friendships and loneliness, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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The strangest sounds comfort us and leave us in peace, the familiar sounds that we associate with good things like friendships and loneliness, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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A remembrance of a kid seen view walking a dirt road through trees, then this change of scenery. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching words.
