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Cookie

Acrostic

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, COOKIE, follows the vertical theme and finds a dual use for 'cookie'. Not to worry though; kids (nor I) will forget the difference between the two.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from NaughtieScribe
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You are so wrong, wrong, wrong. What do you think their snacking on while they pound the keyboard, LOL. Cookies are the best multitasking snack (Chips & Popcorn are a close second). You never have to worry about spilling them and ruining your keyboard or device. I found this a delightful and fun read. There's nothing I would tweak. Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Thanks for a great review ..interesting how words morph in meaning zanya
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Very cute. No, kids of all ages will always know the delicious kind of cookies. But we all need to be careful about the other type of cookies which follow and direct our internet actions.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Yes ..how language changes !!thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Dumbledor
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Nice acrostic, with a message. A theme most of my generation talk about, how the simple things of life, are being lost to computer graphics, and games. Yet maybe cookies, will still hold there own, even if they are just being munched through, while playing , the latest computer game........

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Great ..thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Enjoy cookies, it may be extinct, a nice and fun acrostic poem about cookies, well said and well done; thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Thanks for critique zanya
Comment from Fabiha_N
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I enjoyed reading this! I agree that the internet is such a huge thing in the world now that no one with access to the web can live without it. Great read!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is an interesting story for the 'Acrostic Poem' writing prompt.
A good message in so few words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
    Thanks for reading and critique zanya