Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is cute and fun. I thoroughly enjoyed the banter back and forth. I enjoyed the flow and content. Thank you for sharing this. Well done. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks, Jeff, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from wordsfromsue

Excellent

Okay, I quite enjoyed your tale. :-) The dialog was great and I found Miss Amoeba's boredom with RBC very funny. :-)

Never really thought about my innards having a conversation like this, but I suppose they do.

After I eat White Castles, probably!

Great writing. :-)

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks for the great review, Sue. Bill

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

A co-worker went south of the border and then harassed her doc for three months to get rid of Dis and Terry. One missionary gave himself a tapeworm for his tour in Africa. Dis and Terry can't abide tapeworms...first script I've read this year. Maybe I should do one. Only way I ever get my name on the front page. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Sounds like a lot of internal struggle there. Thanks for giving this a look, LIJ. Bill

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This tells an intelligent scene mature, about amoeba's struggle for survival; well said, well done; thank you sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks, ALD

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Bill,

very clever and funny piece you've scripted here.
Cousins. I refer to them as Dis and Terry. - very nice...lol

All the best
G

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you, G.

Comment from Angela VA

Excellent

Ha ha! This is a cute dialogue script. Is this a stand-alone or part of a larger work? I enjoyed your puns. I didn't see anything that needed fixing or reworking. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

This script is by itself. The Amoeba World is a series that will go to ten in different genres. There are other animal worlds that have ten parts as well in my portfolio.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Another funny one.
Well written. The dialogue is good and easy to follow.
Well done and thanks for sharing this one.
Looking forward to the next.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Fantastic. I love your sense of humour, Bill. Or is this actually part of the science curriculum? I think it's a lot more interesting this way.

Excellent script and only one cell to live. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thanks, Gloria. Oh look! It's Dis and Terry. Gotta run!

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A blood cell chats with an Amoeba in the heart.Isn't this how blood clots are formed? What's next heart disease? This is funny, but why fade to black? It should have been fade to white.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Typically, one cell does not a blood clot make. I meant to write fade to white, but my keyboard went wrong on the last word. I struggled to type a W, but it wasn't happening. I got on the phone with Dell to try and fix it. The guy suggested buying a new keyboard or getting a talk-to-write app. Finally a voodoo fellow blew some powder on it and the word Roanoke appeared. A sand blaster was rented and-- well, you can guess the rest.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I loved the way you wrote this, it was so clever. Of course, WBC has to check out any new foreign bodies in the blood-stream, and RBC is busy keeping the oxygen flowing to the brain, or it will be kaput! The final line by AA. was a wonderful finale! Well done, that was so creative. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thank you, Sandra.